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Chapter #5

Denied!

    by: Cainiam Author IconMail Icon
Moonbounce was still wriggling her flank back and forth as she readied her armour, that chubby butt raised right up into the air. Then something stabbed her right in the ass. "Eep!" came the cry of the Thestral as she kicked out her legs, two sharp pinpricks having embedded right in her rounded right rump cheek.

"Sorry, Bounce... I haven't eaten all day and with flanks like yours..." Nox's voice came from behind her, making the mare's eyes go wide as she assumed he had trotted off. "Going to have to transfer you to the food department," the Thestral said with a greedy smile, his forked tongue licking his lips as he still had the delicious taste of Moon's rear on his tongue.

Moonbounce's mind reeled at his words, the officer she had been waiting for, her commanding officer, deciding she'd serve him better as a meal than as a guard under him. It was almost enough to make her cry... but she wasn't going to let anypony chew on her rump! Her trademark bouncy rump cheeks suddenly shoved back with strength, bashing Nox in the snout and pushing him back, right into line as she lifted her two hind legs in a powerful buck. "Get off of me!" she shrieked as all the air slammed out of Nox's lungs, the officer letting out a wheeze before he stumbled back and landed on the floor with a slam.

Cadet Moonbounce blinked as she turned around, looking around, and then down at the stallion who was still hacking out his lungs on the floor. Had she won in a single kick? She prodded him with a hoof... she should probably report this to somepony right?
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