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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #2037796

The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

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Chapter #5

At the bar

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
You follow the man for a little while as he made his way to security. But you lost interest when you saw a bar. You hadn't even been in a bar since you were only eighteen years old and the drinking age in your state is twenty-one. You could have your first drink at a bar if you wanted if you used the orb. But when you got into the bar you found not only drinking, but smoking. Smoking was prohibited in many places these days so that when you found so mean people smoking at the same time it took you aback. You considered smoking to be a babyish habit, it was so bad for you and it was just like an infant who needed his thumb in his mouth. You decided to make a change, everyone who smoked would lose interest and sucking their thumbs would be as appealing as smoking had been. These people quickly put out their cigarettes but were too embarrassed to put their thumb in their mouths. The urge was so strong they felt they had to leave to do what they wanted. You decided that just like smoking when with drinking for these people that to complete the analogy they wouldn't want to drink alcohol anymore but they would prefer to drink formula...out of a baby bottle of course. More than half the clientele saw no reason for themselves to be in the bar anymore and left.

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