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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.
This choice: Vienna is home with her boyfriend  •  Go Back...
Chapter #3

Vienna and her boyfriend

    by: JamieBlonde Author IconMail Icon
You knocked on Vienna's house's door and waited. You had no idea what you were going to do with her, if anything at all. Maybe you would just talk. Unfortunatley, that didn't seem to be a possibility: Vienna's boyfriend, Marcus, opened the door. He almost towered over your shortness, him being just over six foot tall, his toned body and neatly trimmed hair making him look as handsome as ever. Of course, Marcus was just one of many things that annoyed you about Vienna; why should she, spoiled as she is, get the perfect boyfriend, while you had nobody at all? "What do you want?" he asked as he opened the door, looking down on you both physically and in his speech. You decided to get exactly what you wanted from Marcus, so you gripped the orb as hard as you could as you answered him. "I want you do everything I say, and enjoy doing it." Your voice echoed around nothing, as if it had reverb. The boy's eyes went cloudy for a moment, then he snapped back to reality.

"Oh! Laura! I was just hanging with Vienna, do you want to come in?" His tone had changed to a much more polite one, as if he was eager to do what you wanted. Marcus almost being your doorman for the house was exciting. You knew the mind control had worked, so you whispered something in his ear as you passed him. "Follow me and stay quiet. As you listen to me and Vienna talk, your affections for her will transfer to me."

As you continued on into the house to find Vienna, you could almost swear you heard the boy mumble a "Yes Misstress," in his low voice.

You have the following choices:

1. Simply steal Vienna's boyfriend

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2. Make both of them fall in love with you

3. Something else

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