Chapter #8It's not over Jeice! by: Azerreza   "Hoooollyyy fuuuuuuuuuuck !" he said, before he puts his hand on his neck, surprised by his new voice, which was very deep. Then he smiled and said: "Thanks Lord Frieza for th... ????????". Jeice could not finish his sentence; he had just felt a new wave pass through his body. "OH MY GOSH IT... IT'S NOT OVER !!!" he yelled.
He closed his eyes and grunted in pain. His whole body was boiling and he felt like he was going to explode, and it was increasing, more and more and more and more ! Until finally...
"ooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!"
His shoulders exploded, almost doubling, then his neck did the same, almost disappearing in this muscle mountain were his traps. He flexed his biceps which also explode, becoming simply enormous, his pecs doubling in size, blocking his view of his ripped six-pack. This latter exploded, row by row, Jeice yelling at each pop but it didn't stop there; a fourth row popped from nowhere, giving him a ultra ripped muscular eight-pack, with an Adonis belt carved with an axe and a net of veins leading to his crotch. His back were a set of rocky mountains, or rather, muscular mountains and it was more than twice as wide at the shoulders as at the waist. His legs exploded, cracking the ground and becoming bigger than a sequoia and were covered with veins, his calves were two fucking balloons implanted under his skin. And obviously, his dick, which had become a fucking gigantic pole, covered with big veins.
And finally, the growth seemed to be over.
Jeice was here, head up, closed fists, moaning slowly of pleasure, red flashes were appearing, signs of an insane power. He must have been 8"8' tall, taller than Burter who was the taller member of commando Ginuy and was 8"3' tall.
Frieza was gloating: this machine worked hahahaha ! THIS MACHINE WORKED !!!
"Well Jeice, how do you feel ?" asked Frieza.
Jeice took few seconds for to stop to moan and finally said: "... Fine !". His voice was FUCKING deep. "VERY fine... Thanks for the... promotion" he said in smiling slightly.
"Oh you're welcome, you've been very helpful." replied Frieza. He turned to one of the soldiers: "An estimation of his power ?" he asked.
The soldier turn on his scooter and a few seconds later his eyes widened...
"... ... 1... 1.700.000 !"
Frieza smiled, perfect, absolutely perfect !! Jeice's power was 85.000 before, it was a very nice increase ! That made Jeice the most powerful soldier of his army.
"Very well, I think we should rename the commando Ginyu to commando Jeice HAHAHAHAHAHA !" said Frieza.
Jeice smiled at this sentence.
"very well, you can dispose Jeice !"
"Thanks Lord Frieza" said Jeice, before leaving. His heavy steps resounded in the room, and we could hear slightly Jeice say "Ooooooooh fuuuuuuuuuuck, these feelings are insane !"
"Well well well, let's get down to business !" said Frieza.
The soldiers pointed the gun at him, ready to fire.
"NOT NOW IDIOTS ! Wait until I reach my final form !"
Frieza leaves his flying pod and he focused.
A purple aura appeared and he went quickly from his first form to his final form.
He turned towards soldiers, in smiling and said, arm extended.
"Be happy, because this is the only time I would allow you to shoot me ! FIRE !"   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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