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A story about a notebook which changes reality whenever you write "What if..."

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Chapter #7

Susan tries to write something nice

    by: Cardio Author IconMail Icon
Susan rolled her pencil in her fingers and decided she'd messed with you enough and tried to think of something nice she could do for you. It took a few minutes but she realized something. With the notebook she had kind of created Francesca out of nowhere, she didn't really have family or friends. Susan got sad when she thought of you just cleaning the house all alone doing nothing else. She finally figured out exactly what she wanted to do when she boarded the private jet set for Paris. Susan wrote down her next sentence in the notebook.

What if after Dan was done with work each day he'd hang out with a cute friend. Dan.

Susan smiled at her handiwork. She thought you'd appreciate the chance to spend a few hours with a cute girl for the week. At least that was her though process.

Meanwhile back at your home as you finished unloading the dishwasher you felt a ping in the back of your mind. Somehow you knew that Susan had just written something in the notebook concerning you. You figured she'd made you aware of it so when you saw or felt whatever the notebook did you'd notice it but you don't know exactly what it is yet. After you put up the last of the dishes you start to think about looking around the house to maybe see if you notice anything out of the ordinary, when suddenly the doorbell rings. Confused you walk to the door to answer it, you weren't expecting anyone were you? You get the nagging feeling that this might have something to do with Susan, but even with that in mind you make your way to the front door and opened it.

You are greeted with a surprise hug from a stranger as they say to you, "Great to see you Francesca, you ready to hit the town?" They break the hug and you are a bit stunned as you look at this stranger who you vaguely feel that you are supposed to be very good friends with.

You have the following choices:

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1. The stranger is a cute girl

2. The stranger is a cute guy

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