This choice: Run to the front desk yelling for help • Go Back...Chapter #6Run to the front desk yelling for help by: Tight Fit   A scream of pure horror comes from your glossy lips as you stagger toward the door, the new thickness of the fur on your outfit swaying heavily with every step you take. You open the door and stumble into the hallway, desperately looking around for the elevator, your vision obscured on all sides by pink sparkling fur. You start heading down the hall, and hear a loud ding in the direction you're heading. You see the elevator doors open, and two girls in their late teens step out. They stop dead in their tracks and stare at you wide eyed. You stop walking, your eyes lock, and they burst into laughter.
"Oh my GOD! It worked! I can't believe it worked!" one of them laughs, covering her mouth with her hands.
"I knew it would!" the other cries out. "I knew it would, but didn't know how WELL it would work! This is better than anything I could've hoped for!"
They burst into hysterics, pointing and laughing at your incredibly gaudy and fluffy pink getup. Sweat forms on your brow as you burn with embarrasment.
"What... what is this?" you yell out, grabbing at the maze of crinolines and fur in front of you. "What did you do to me?!"
"Nothing that you didn't deserve!" one of them sneers. "I'm sure everyone at the bar last night would agree, and would be excited to see what happens when you cross the line!"
Your breath quickens as you frantically try to remember what you did, but everything past last afternoon is a blank.
"Please, I'm sorry!" you blurt out, tears forming in your immaculately made over eyes. "I don't remember what I did, but I'm sorry!"
"Of course you don't remember," one of the girls says, grinning evilly. "We wiped your memory."
"Wha..." you stammer. "How? WHY!"
"Well, we don't think your punishment would be great enough if you knew WHY you were receiving it!" The girls laugh together, again looking at how ridiculous you look. "We'd rather see you stumbling around like a scared lost little sissy, getting what she deserves without ever knowing why! Don't worry, I'm sure you'll find a way out of it, if you ever remember why you're there in the first place!" The girls back into the elevator suddenly, and the doors begin to close.
"WAIT!" you yell out, moving toward them, but the last you see of them is their hysterical laughter as the doors close shut. You mash the button, but the elevator is already going back down to the lobby. You stare bewildered at the closed doors, then back down at your massive crinolined dress, and the huge fur collar and trim which surrounds you, tickling the tiny bit of your face that isn't surrounded by the huge pink fur ball. You pull and yank at your outfit again, finding its still clinging tight to every inch of your skin.
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