This choice: From being really big to being monstrous! • Go Back...Chapter #36Monstrous Louis by: Wokod   Ten months after Louis' wish.
"But doctor, there must be an explanation!" Louis' mother asked.
The doctor en her both looked at Louis, just with his underwear on, proudly smiling in all his 6'8 glory. His muscles were now so huge he looked like a bodybuilder, except you could tell each muscle wasn't just made up to look bigger. It was just pulsing with insane strength. And his XXXL boxers were molding his enormous package. The fact that his face also looked manlier than his own father was another thing that made his mother uncomfortable. Louis was a pillar of strength and manliness.
"So, you say your daughter was also subject to an... impressive growth lately?" the doctor asked.
"Yes, in a, let's say, different way. But it's over now. Why, could it be linked?"
"I don't think it's a coincidence. Your husband and yourself must have given to your children a unique genetic combination resulting in impressive growth for your kids. But do not worry, Louis here is quite impressive indeed, but the human body can only take so much strain. His skeleton itself has its limits. You shouldn't worry and rejoice, as you're the proud mother of a very healthy and strong boy!" the man said "But Louis... don't lie to me. You're hitting the gym, muscles don't grow magically." winked the man "You should calm down on exercising."
"But I'm not." Louis said in his now deeper voice "The only thing I'm hitting is morons."
His mother looked down in shame. Indeed. Lately, Louis had beaten up a few guys at school. Former bullies, he said, but the broken arms, noses and legs of the poor guys were enough to make the explanation sounds a bit weak. The victim had grown, and grown, big enough to become the bully of the former bullies. School had threatened his family to expel him if he was gonna do it once again. And his parents had to pay for the medical fees of the victims. Their situation was even worse than when it was just Teri growing and asking for bigger bras every two weeks or so.
"Don't worry, mam, your son may grow a little more, maybe a couple inches, but trust Mother Nature!"
Fourteen months after Louis' wish.
The doctor was agape.
He had in his hands the X-ray picture of Louis, from a few days ago. And again, Louis mother, looking more tired than ever, was sitting in front of him was Louis was having difficulties getting back into his clothes.
"Your... how to say this? Your... your son's skeleton itself is developing. It... it just can't be."
"What do you mean?" Louis mother asked. "I don't understand."
"I know it's... listen. If I wasn't looking at your son here and now, I thought this picture was a prank. Your... your son's skull is changing to allow his growth to go on. I can't explain it."
"You mean he's still growing? But you said..."
"I know what I said" the man sweated heavily "It's just... above everything I know. His skeleton isn't growing along, with bones thickening a bit and stretching like for anyone else... his bones are changing shape. His ribcage is reinforcing itself into some kind of heavy cage made of the thicker bones I've ever seen. It's going broader to allow space for his muscles to develop. His heart and lungs inside have expanded into huge things able to provide oxygen and blood for her whole body. The bones of his legs are trunks-like, and so are his arms bones. His hands themselves are growing larger, and I swear his skull seems to go thicker too, like his whole body is naturally changing into... into..."
"Into what?" Louis mother asked, concerned.
"The only word I got looking at this picture is... it looks like the skeleton of... an ogre."
"Damn clothes, why are they so small?"
Even Louis voice sounded kind of like the one of ogres in movies. Deep, cavernous, and, well, the only voice looking reasonable for the 7'6 mountain of enormous muscles he had turned into. There wasn't a straight line on his body except for his perfectly squared jaw, everything being muscles above muscles, each of them looking strong enough to stop a tank. And damn... he was also looking really hot. At school, everyone was afraid of him, but the combination of his enormous body and his bad attitude had slowly turned him from being a jerk to being the guy boys fear, and girls lust for. But the rumor was : Louis had grown so big down there he had no way to have regular sex. Rumors also said he asked the girls who tried to sleep with him to give him hand jobs... with both their hands. And came over them.
During a dinner with Greg, Donald made the mistake of telling his friend how Louis had been quite troublesome lately. Louis heard. Donald woke up in the hospital. And about school? The principal indeed tried to expel him after Louis threw a guy he didn't like across the football field. But the very evening of the incident, the principal found his own car crushed like a toy on the parking lot. No one had seen anything, of course. But they all advised him to be really nice with Louis from now on. Louis got the excuses from the principal the next day.
But today, the doctor couldn't do anything but admit his lack of knowledge on the matter. Louis and his mother were sent home, but as Louis got into his mom's car, he was so heavy the thing made worrying sound, and as his mother tried to move, the engine made a bursting sound and a dark cloud of smoke erupted from it.
"Poor little car... then, I'm taking it home."
He got out of the car, and his mother screamed in shock as the car was lifted off the ground. Easily, Louis lifted it above his head, and ran back to his home without sweating, but leaving serious footprints in the concrete all the way, people looking at the crazy show, frozen. He dropped the car in front of the family house and bent to come in, his muscles rubbing against the sides of the doorframe and threatening to break holes in the wall. Lifting the car had been a dirty job, and a shower would be more than welcome. Louis locked himself in the bathroom, but just before he turned the water on, her heard someone banging at the door. Who dared?
"Louis, come explain yourself!" Teri's voice shouted "I wanted to sleep with Bill and he said you swore to kill anyone who'd dare touch me! Why are you doing this, you huge moron?! I have needs, you kn..."
The door opened, and Teri faced Louis, naked. She looked at the muscles facing her, unable to name most of them. Louis was massive, sure, but naked? It was crazy! As she looked down, she saw the snake between his legs slowly hardening and growing.
"Louis?!"
"Didn't you say you have needs?"
"Louis, no, you're my brother!" she exclaimed "We can't...dad would..."
"Dad is in the hospital and will go back there if he dares displease me. And yes, I'll kill anyone touching you. You're mine, sister."
"Louis, that's..."
"You weren't this shy when you caught me spying on you when I was all small and skinny? Is the big new me intimidating?"
"I... Louis, please... you're intimidating, yes, I admit" she blushed, taking a step back when the 14'' cock had grown so long it started poking at the underside of her breasts. As she did, she freed it, the huge shaft jumping higher in the move until its head was the same level hers was.
"We're both huge, sis'. Do we really deserve anyone else?"
She wanted to answer... but ran away to her bedroom, locking herself in.
"Later, sis." Louis said.
Seventeen months after Louis' wish.
Louis had grown to a crazy 7'10, and grown so large his parents had to install double doors in the whole house so their giant son could walk. Donald didn't even dare speak to him or look at him in the eyes, to afraid of the powerhouse his son had turned into. The school wasn't this lucky : they needed time to change all the doors. Too much time to Louis tastes. So he just exploded the doorframes with his huge body, letting the staff repair behind him. His voice was now even deeper, and his body wasn't just getting crazier and strangely sexier : he started emitting a strange musky smell, no girl could ignore. It aroused them to the point they had to leave class to masturbate. And Louis started having his first sessions with several girls at once.
But he wasn't done.
Sixteen months after Louis' wish.
A few weeks after Louis sixteenth birthday, the whole house was woken up in the middle of the night by a crashing sound. As everyone ran to Louis bedroom, they found a hole in the floor, and the boy on his crashed bed, on floor lower.
At 8'2, and a body so broad he barely fit in the back of a pickup now, he had just grown too heavy for a middle class house floor.
Eighteen months after Louis' wish.
The school cancelled the football championship when its whole football team had to forfeit because of all the players having too much broken bones. They didn't speak to Louis "the right way", and the 8'6 monster crushed them all. With one hand.
Twenty-four months after Louis' wish...   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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