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This story about a guy who met a strange old woman who gave him a magic apple.
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When Jim gets home his parents force the kids t...

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Jim was bitter on the way home, but the troubled teen had managed to calm down quite a bit. Whilst still moody the boy was no longer a ragging inferno. When he got inside Susan was showing their mother here report card. "All A's again I have to say hunny that's impressive" Jim flicked his Eyebrow upward "he was rather happy for Susan bringing her grades up, but the one part of the sentence "again" bothered him. Susan was clever but never a particularly good student. Still Jim couldn't care less about his sister's achievements and went to go grab a drink.

In the kitchen the angsty teen grabbed a glass of water to quench his thirst. As he pulled the cup up something strange happened, the 15 year felt a cold splash all over his shirt. "Huh?" The boy looked down in curiosity to find a good majority of the water had gotten all over his shirt. "What the!?" Trying to get yet another glass Jim fills the cup up only to bring it half way before involuntary dopping it "DA HECK!?!"

The shattered glass succeeded only in summoning the two female family members from the kitchen. "YOU SEE, YOU SEE, I TOLD YOU, HE'S JUST A BIG DUMB BABY PRETENDING TO BE AN ADULT!!!" Susan proclaimed loudly pointing at her older brother.

Jim wrinkled his nose at this offense. His rage quickly returning. "WHO ARE YOU CALLING A BABY TWERP YOUR THE BRAT AROUND HERE!" Jim stomped in anger as his sister mocked his mistake. Jim was so focused on her he had ignored the exasperated look on his mom's face. "That's it Jimmy!" Amanda snapped back at him. "First the constant F's and the broken glasses, and now your just going to wet yourself in the middle of the kitchen! I've had enough your sister is right! From now on she's in charge!"

Jim's face wrinkled in utter horror "what do you mean she's in charge....... AND WHAT F'S, I ONLY SPILLED ONE GLASS AN....." it was only now that Jim was just catching the last of his mother's points. Staring down at his crotch the boy witnessed a growing wet spot spread through the center of his jeans. "Uh ..... oh noooo no NO!" He grabbed the crotch of his pants fleeing to the up stairs bathroom.
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