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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1880637

A magic laptop lets you edit other people

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Chapter #5

Freshman

    by: sharpshooter Author IconMail Icon
You think of someone. Sofia Young, a petite brunette in freshman year whom you thought was cute. Her body was slim, but had breasts and ass larger than one would expect from a girl her size. Her long brown hair was wavy; she had big brown doe eyes, plump and kissable lips, and a faint cluster of freckles decorating each cheek. You decided to check out her profile, so you clicked on the link for 'Freshman', and scrolled down to find her name under 'Y' for 'Young, Sofia'. You open up her file, and are shocked by the sheer volume of information that seems to detail every aspect of her body and mind. Even more surprising, you seem to be able to edit information. You set to work on what to change.

You didn't have to change much in terms of physical changes. You made her breasts a few sizes bigger, her ass firmer and her hair longer so now it fell to the backs of her knees. You then moved onto mental changes. First you made yourself her boyfriend. Following that, a string of additional options appeared. You made her completely loyal and head over heels in love with you. She was already kinky and submissive and an avid cosplayer, so you didn't even have to change those things. You made sure that her personality was the same, but you set a hypnotic trigger in her head. Now whenever you say to her the phrase 'Bad Pet', her personality would go dormant and she would become completely obedient until you say to her the release phrase, 'Good Girl', after which she will return to normal with no recollection of her time as a pet. Upon awakening, she will ask what happened, and will take any explanation at face value.

You clicked 'Done' and saved the changes.

What next?

You have the following choices:

1. Play with another girl

2. Your phone rings

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