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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1877355
Ponyville looks a lot bigger...... oh, I'm smaller
This choice: Wanting to Crush You Way  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Little Pest

    by: Mr. Pickle Author IconMail Icon
"Ew, great, now ah got a pest problem on mah farm. Why does it always have to be during the busy season." she boomed in your direction. "NO APPLEJACK! I'M NOT A BUG! HELP ME!" But your voice is too tiny for her ears.

She didn't pay attention to your tiny mass. All she saw was a bug that was close to eating an apple. "Ya'll already been nibbling at mah apples." She looked at the apple you took a bite out of. So that added onto your trouble. Then the worst thing you could've ever seen..... Applejack raised her hoof above you.

"NOOO!" you scream as you jump out of the way. Luckily you moved enough so her hoof didn't hit you. The ground boomed and shook. "Little pest, stay still." she boomed as she raised it again. You jump out of the way again as her hoof lands next to you again. You had a steeper fall this time. You look around you and you see you landed in a crater, to you. In reality, it was Applejacks hoof print you were standing in.

"PLEASE! STOP!" you beg on the verge of tears. She looked at you in disgust and aggravation. A look you never wanted to see given to you. Its a face everyone home gave you, and it always made you sad when no one would comfort you. You felt so alone and small right now (*drum drum simbal crash*).

AJ raised her hoof again, and aimed for you. You ran for your now tiny life.

BOOM!

She planted her hoof in her hoof print and stomped after you. You could only run, and lightly cry too. She was gaining fast, even though it wasn't hard for her at your size. You came up to the wall of her barn and reached a dead end.

BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! "YER ALL OUTTA PLACES TA RUN." she boomed as she stomped closer to you. BOOM! BOOM! She finally stopped in front of you, only a few tiny feet away. You could only look up to the giant face of the pony you always admired. She then proceeded to raise her hoof again.

"AJ! NOOO!" you screamed in tears. And she still hovered her hoof over you. The shadow looked a half mile around you. You curled up and cried as you looked up one last time at your favorite pony. "I love you Applejack." you say as your last words. Her expression didn't change at all. You cover your face so you can't see death crush your body like a pea. And you could do nothing but cry and know your tiny cries won't be heard to the larger world.

BOOM!

The world shook around you....... but you were still alive.

You slowly uncover your face to see what happened. You still crying, you see a titanic hoof next to you. Was your tiny crying actually heard? That must be what you felt. But who's hoof was it?

You have the following choices:

1. Applejack's

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2. Apple Bloom's

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3. Fluttershy's

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