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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1806774
Let us suppose that he was not in Gryffindor but in one of the other Houses?
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Chapter #6

Neville Longbottom (who was usually insecure)

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Neville was feeling kinda sad. The boys were playing Quidditch and he was never asked to play along because he was too slow, too clumsy and too insecure. He was short and uncoordinated.

Harry and John approached him, with Harry holding a small bottle in his hand.

"Hey Neville? Would you mind trying this potion we created? It will give you some more confidence!" John said to him.

"Yeah... It will make you feel great!" Harry added.

"Oh alright... Considering I'm feeling bummed right now..." he sighed, as he stood up and took the small bottle.

"You better remove your coat and shirt!" John suggested.

Neville removed the coat and tie, now only wearing his undershirt and shorts.

He took the bottle and removed the cap, placing it at his lips and drinking the entire contents of the bottle in one big gulp!

"Ahh... That tasted like orange juice!" he said, as he handed the bottle back to John."So, how long does this last?"

"Thirty minutes... If we made the potion right... We're just not sure..." Harry sighed.

"Ohh wow... Well, hope it works... Uhh..." Neville groaned, as he was overcome by a rumbling feeling coming from deep within his body.

Suddenly, all his muscles stiffened up. Neville took a step back, not knowing what was happening to him. Then, every single muscle in his body started to inflate like a balloon! His calves grew bigger and rounder; his quads became wider and thicker; his arms thickened with muscle; his biceps hardened and bulged; his pectorals pushed outwards and sideways; his abdominal muscles became more defined and his torso widened suddenly... All at once!

"Look at him! It worked!" John cheered.

"How do you feel, Neville?" Harry asked his muscular friend.

"Wow! Holy smoke! I--- I..." Neville gasped, as he flexed his arms, allowing big biceps to pop up on his arms. "I feel strong!"

"You should revert back to normal in a few minutes..." John said, looking at his watch....

You have the following choices:

1. Neville returns to normal

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2. Uh oh! Neville grows even MORE muscular!

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