Chapter #6Foot Smell Torture! by: Carl   Kicking off her sneaker she grabbed it and thrust the opening over Lisa’s mouth and nose. The sour foot stench coming from the ratty sneakers caused her to cringe away but Laura was merciless. Bound hand a foot she couldn’t escape the terrible stench. Lisa thought she would die right there, however while the foot stench was foul, it wasn’t toxic like pollutants or carcinogens from cigarettes. It left her short of breath but not in a lung destroying manner.
After a minute or two of rubbing her sneaker into Lisa’s face Laura removed it and sat back down. Blonde Britney was next. She had already taken off her shoes. The other girls held their nose as they smelled the stinky feet from afar. Jasmine commented, “Damn girl what died in those shoes!” Britney placed her socked feet right over Lisa’s mouth and nose. Lisa thought the shoe smell was bad but this was terrible. Sweaty wet socks were being pushed into her mouth and onto her nose. The damp stench DID set off her Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease and she began to panic and thrash on the floor.
She gasped like a fish out of the water and Britney’s cruel feet didn’t let up at all. Spots appeared before her eyes as she just couldn’t get the oxygen needed to sustain her. All four of them were laughing at her as she suffocated. Her lungs burned crying out for good clean oxygen, the kind that this college had offered in the brochures…
Seeing her start to turn a shade of purple Britney let up. There was so much more fun to be had first. After several long minutes Lisa was able to get her breath back. Tears streamed down her face. They were cruelly torturing her and delighting in her pain it wasn’t fair! She pleaded with them, “Please stop, please, please, I’ll be a good girl please stop.” They laughed at her mocking her.
“This little piggy went wah wah wah.”
“I bet she wants her mommy.”
“Aww poor little miss tattle.”
Lisa continued to cry out desperately begging. She didn’t want to die here suffocated to death with their foul smell. There was so much to live her, her parents, her future careers, she begged. Laura clapped her hands. “Well if you want to be a good girl, you should make yourself useful.” Lisa saw a glimmer of hope and asked, “H-How?” Laura smiled a cat’s grin, “Good girls obey their superiors, and we are definitely your superiors, you agree, of course?” Lisa knew the correct answer was yes, and she gave it.
“Good then you can start by obeying my first command; remove my socks… with your teeth!” Crossing her legs she made Lisa wriggle her way forward. She reached up with her mouth to grab at the toe part of the sock and tried to pull. Laura toyed with her. She arched her foot up preventing an easy pull off. Lisa struggled to adjust and tried to pull only to fall backwards her mouth clicking painfully as she lost the sock. “God she can’t do anything right,” Ashley remarked.
With a sniffle she tried again and this time Laura let her pull the sock off. A fresh wave of foot odor moved throughout the room. Seeing Lisa flinch away Laura snapped at her saying, “Good girls don’t flinch from their superior’s feet, get your worthless nose in between my toes and give me a good sniff.” Lisa knew her only hope was pleasing the professor, though in reality it was a fool’s hope. The squirmed forward again and placed her nose between the big toe and the second toe and give a sharp hard sniff. Immediately fire returned to her lungs as she coughed out in pain. Again the girls laughed.
“Make her do it again!” Britney suggested.
And she did twice more out of spite. And each time Lisa felt the sharp pain in her chest. Laura then made her take off the sock of her other foot and sniff that one as well. She was made to take off all the socks except Jasmine whose feet were already bare. Britney’s feet were the worst, when Lisa took off her socks fresh groans from the other three women were made.
After this was done Laura patted Lisa’s head like a dog, “Good girl! Now I do hope you will continue to obey.” Lisa cringed at learning the torment would continue but knowing this was her only chance she nodded her head, “Yes ma’am I’m a g-good girl I am.” Britney said, “Well good girls should apologize to their betters, beg us to forgive you for having the nerve to actually tell us what to do.” Lisa did as she asked, the girls roared with laugher. Lisa was made to beg and apologize individually to each of the women there.
Ashley who was the tallest and had the largest feet said, “Look at you, you are a little worm begging forgiveness from those above. Don’t apologize to me, apologize to my feet.” Lisa wasn’t sure what to do so she looked down at the feet and said, “I-I’m s-s-sorry feet?” Snickering Ashley said, “That’s not how you apologize to feet, you kiss them!” Lisa quickly obeyed trying to get done with this humiliating task. Jasmine laughed, “You call that kissing? Piggy have you ever even kissed a boy?” The truth was that she hadn’t. Her parents were very protective it was one of the reasons she had gone to college so that she could finally date like the other girls!
Crimson with shame she said, “N-no.”
Cackling with laugher they mocked and derided her. Between those hurtful comments and the still foul odor reeking from their feet she started to have another respiratory attack. The girls just laughed and waited for her to stop heaving and wheezing. Britney shook her head, “No wonder no one wants to kiss you, you are little miss freak out over anything.”
After the attack subsided Ashley pointed at her feet. “Kiss them like you would kiss a boy, because you know you never will.” Lisa once again kissed her feet. This time trying to think about the movies and how they kissed there. She added her tongue and tried to imagine the cute guy she saw in class that day… But it was impossible. The foot odor and the slimly taste of her sweaty feet wouldn’t allow for that image to take hold. Ashley let her continue for several minutes enjoying the feeling of having this helpless loser at her feet.
Soon though Jasmine wanted her turn she said, “All right super geek get over here.” Lisa wormed her way over there, being trussed up it was difficult. Lisa kissed her dirty feet, but that wasn’t enough for Jasmine. “My feet have walked through grass, the parking lot, and all over the gym, they are dirty be a good girl and clean them.” Lisa cringed as she slowly started to the lick and scrape off the dirt from Jasmine’s size 5 feet. The taste was awful and even though Jasmine’s feet had not been confined in a pair of old sneakers they still reeked of feet. The girls continued their constant verbal abuse.
“Oh my God, she’s licking the dirt!”
“Hey pigs do like dirt so it works….”
“She is such a loser how low do you have to be to clean dirty feet with your tongue!”
Lisa licked Jasmine’s soles, her arch, the toes, and the heel. Most of the dirt was starting to come off after several minutes of diligent disgusting working but some she had to scrape off with her teeth. “Be sure to get underneath my toe nails piggy.” Lisa sucked on her toes one at a time, using her tongue to get the gunk and dirt out from underneath the nail. The girls saw that as particularly amusing and snapped several pictures with their camera phones. Lisa thought she was going to die from embarrassment. Finally she was done and Jasmine’s feet were spotless. Jasmine mocked her and said, “Good girl! Glad to see your putting that college education to work cleaning the feet of your superiors.”
Laura and the other two girls also wanted their feet cleaned. Even though they were just sweaty and not dirty it didn’t help Lisa much. Lisa licked and sucked those feet, they tasted foul, slimy, and salty due to the sweat. After the thorough cleaning Laura decided to take charge of the last stage of their torment. “Lisa, you have just cleaned and sniffed the feet of us. How pathetic. What kind of weak willed spineless excuse for a person are you?”
Lisa didn’t know how to respond. She just looked down; her bonds were still tight about her. “You know we are better then you, yes?” She nodded. “You know you are a loser of the worst degree and deserve everything you get.” Lisa disagreed but she nodded anyway. She had done everything they had told her to do she was being a good girl they would let her go and she could leave this place and never look back. Her parents were waiting for her; she had a life ahead of her she could go to class from on-line…
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