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What's it like as predator, instead of prey?

This choice: Someone heard. Someone's coming.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #11

Rescued

    by: manubestofplus Author IconMail Icon
*an addition by: Eva*

You can feel yourself being lifted off the ground and with another gulp your stomach enters Mike's mouth leaving your legs thrashing wildly hoping to find anything to try and push yourself out of here.

Suddenly you hear a muffled voice from outside it sounds like someone else has walked in on Mike in the middle of a meal and you immediately shout for help. A hand grabs a hold of your ankle and in reflex you grab a hold of Jen's hand and feel a strong tug backward which pulls you entirely out of his mouth and Jen midway her waist onward still inside of Mike. A second heave and Jen's naked form hits the floor and immediately passes out.

You tilt your head to see who just saved you and see one of Mike's older friends Chris staring a hole right through Mike who is also looking furious.

"What the hell do you think you're doing?" Mike yells seemingly not caring about either his own sister or his girlfriend only that hes been deprived of a meal.

"You just don't learn do you Mike?" Chris says stepping gingerly over Jen "You're just a total glutton and I cant believe you would eat your own sister or your girlfriend"

"Its none of your business who I eat or what I do" Mike replied "In fact since your the only other person that knows about this maybe I should shut you up as well" he says lunging at Chris his mouth wide open, Mike gets met midway with a straight right that knocks him straight down and unconscious.

Staying remarkably cool you close Mike's door and cover your chest with the remains of your shirt.

"Well thanks and ...um any chance you can tell me what the hell is going on?" you had pretty much only exchanged pleasantries with Chris before but you could tell he had a thing for you but you were too angry right now to care about that.

"Oh Mary uh yeah sure" he mumbles nervously not even looking at you "Here take this" offering his jacket finally looking you in the eye.

The jacket feels cold against your skin but at least its something you zip it halfway and sit-down on the bed.

"Well you know how my dad is a chemist, well he made this revolutionary drug that makes you super strong and wanted me to test it out and it works really well but there was a side effect"

"I'm guessing your not gonna tell me it gave you gills or a tail"

He sort of half smiles "No not quite you pretty much seen the side effect first hand, I knew I shouldn't have gave Mike one of the pills but I never thought he wouldn't try anything like this"

You reach into one of the pockets and find a small brown bottle you hold it up to your eyes but cant seem to read the name of the drug let alone pronounce it.

"I don't want anyone else finding out about these but I don't want to hurt you Mary so I'm gonna let you decide if you take one you'll be like me or Mike if you don't I'll have to trust you to be quiet"

You look back up at Chris and its obvious from how how he's looking at you that he means what hes just said. As a pretty adventurous girl your mind is made up quickly and you pop open the lid and swallow one of the pills.

"Ok all that leaves is to dispose of these two" he says turning to face Jen and Mike "It'll take about five minutes for those pills to kick in so I'll find something to do to pass the time"

He slowly lifts Jen's feet to his mouth and slides them inside his mouth his jaws stretching round them. You watch amazed as he takes his time clearly enjoying himself and as Jens hips disappear her body arches she's enjoying this as well. You watch as with another swallow her breasts lie just outside of his mouth and slowly both slide into the roof his mouth its only then you realize Jen is regaining consciousness. Chris lightly tilts his head back and all that remains outside are her arms and a small amount of her hair, another swallow and her arms slide down only her hands outside it seems almost like she waves then these too slide inside.

You suddenly feel a sharp cramp and bend over doubled in pain then nothing except a small feeling of hunger.

"I'll say this for Mike he had good taste" Chris says smiling "And it seems like those pills have took affect so there is only one thing left to do" he says motioning to your brother.

You look down at Mike he'd tried to eat you earlier but can you really eat your own brother?

You have the following choices:

1. Eat Mike

2. Dont eat Mike

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