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Meet the Smiths, a suburban family whose lives are about to change when a parcel arrives..

This choice: It's time to R-R-R-R-REVENGE !  •  Go Back...
Chapter #8

It's time to R-R-R-R-REVENGE !

    by: Azerreza Author IconMail Icon
When he entered in the hallway, it was crowded, as usual. But this time, everyone quickly turned their heads in his direction and in 2 seconds, everyone fell silent, eyes wide open, mouths agape.

Justin walked in the middle, the crowd pressed against the walls. And at the end of the hallway, there he was, with his gang: Brett ! Justin had the most sadistic smile in history.

He walked towards Brett, who was back turned. When he arrived near them, some of his gang had an expression of terror when they saw the titan. Brett had his back turned and did not see him. Justin arrived behind Brett, posed his huge hand on his shoulder and said calmly...

"Hey maggot !"

Brett turned around and was surprised, surprised to found himself face to face with enormous pecs bigger than his head and abs where each block was bigger than his fist. He raised his head for to see to whom this body belonged and barely had time to say...

"What th... ?"

Before he realizes it, he was flying across the hallway (and when I say flying, I really mean flying). This day, Brett broke the record for the longest jump since he crossed the whole hallway without touching the ground (hallway that is several dozen feet long btw). All those present at this moment could say that they saw a IFB: Identified Flying Brett. Finally he finished his flight against the lockers, smashing them violently.

*BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM*

Some lockers will bear the mark of the shape of Brett's back until the end of their life.

Brett was still stunned. Fortunately he was very well built because someone normal would have ended up in the hospital for sure ! Justin had not held back his strength and clearly, he was not lacking in strength, really not !

Justin walked in this direction, like a fucking tank. People were pressing themselves against the walls, not wanting to be trampled by this tank M1. Nothing would stop him, there was him and Brett and anything or anyone that got in his way would be trampled. There could have been a wall that he would pass through.

He did few steps when suddenly, he felt a blow in his back followed by a *CRAAAAAAAACK* ! Someone had attacked him from behind, or at least TRIED to attack him from behind.

He stopped, turned slowly and saw one of the gang members, who was holding and looking a broken baseball bat in half, wide-eyed, filled with terror.

He had hit him. he had hit him and this bat had broken against his amazing back.

A jubilant smile slowly appeared on his face ! There is two days, he would have ended up in the hospital with a blow like that but now, he was just overpowered !

The guy raised his head very slowly, shaking like a leaf.

Suddenly Justin took the rest of the bat.

"Be careful kid, you will hurt yourself !" he said, in a calm but strong voice.

The guy was shaking and sweating profusely. He was close to fainting.

"Well well well guys, I'll say it one more time... one LAST time" he said slowly, by starting to crush the bat. For a few seconds, only the sound of cracking wood could be heard.

"If I heard you bully anyone, even just one person..."

Justin stopped to crush the bat during one second and stared the group with an evil look. Then suddenly, with one blow, he completely crushed the bat, making them clearly understand the fate that would await them.

Their faces were blue/white, they sweated profusely, they trembled with terror and suddenly they all ran away in screaming. Even the toughest of them all were running away from Justin like little girls.

Well, the gang: done. Now, Brett's turn !

He was just starting to get up, the shock had been brutal. Justin resumed his walk, like a furious bull that nothing can stop. He cracked his knuckles and his neck in smiling. and finally he reached Brett.

Brett was shaking in seeing the enormous feet. He swallowed and began to sweat profusely. His face was white and became blue as he looked up. He saw quads which were bigger than his waist, a python which probably bigger than his arms, eight enormous bricks which were bigger than his fists. And finally, he saw two huge pecs and a small part of the face of Justin. it was over for him, he could do nothing against this muscular titan.

"Well, well, well..." said Justin.

"Y..y...you...you are a monster !" stuttered Brett.

"Oh yeah, you're right Brett, I'm A FUCKING MONSTER ! AND LOOK AT THE MONSTER YOU HAVE CREATED !!!". Justin took his tank top and tore it, revealing his unbelievable muscular chest.

Instantly a chorus of "FUCK" or "SHIT" or "HOLY CRAP !" could be heard, some girls even fainted at the sight of this muscle god.

Brett pissed in his pants.

"Well, let's settle our accounts. Did you say you wanted your rent yesterday ? Ok, you know what ? I'll be nice... you will have the rent !"

Justin took few coins and put them in Brett's locker. But then, suddenly, he caught the Brett's locker and tore it from the wall. Brett's eyes widened even more. Justin began to crush the locker at bare hands, forming a ball of crumpled steel. The hallway was filled with the sound of crushing, tearing, twisting steel. Then Justin dropped what was the Brett's locker in front of him. It crashed to the ground breaking the tiles.

"Good luck in getting it back !" said Justin. "... and you will be in the same state if you bully anyone !" added Justin, before to leave. this time, no cheering, they still could not believe the demonstration of pure power they had just witnessed and nobody wanted to take the risk of upsetting the Beast.

Brett was on the ground, watching with terror at his "locker". Out of the question to stay here one more second ! He got up and ran towards the exit. Outside, he looked for his car and... he found it, but not in the state he hoped: his car was on the roof, as if it had been turned over, and it wasn't all: it was completely sunken in the middle, with a nice... fist print... He found a paper stuck on one of the burst tires, where there were finger marks, as if someone had crushed it with his bare hands. He took the paper in shaking and read...

*Understood, maggot ?*

Brett collapsed in tears in front of the carcass of his car.

Justin, who was watching the scene from afar, exploded with joy and roared to pleasure.

"FUUUUUUUUUUCK YYYYYYEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH !!!" he yelled (btw, his cry was so loud that some windows cracked).

And that's how Brett and his gang's reign ended.

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