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Tim has always tried to loose his fat, but now he changes his mind.
This choice: He surprises Tim with a trip to the big city!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Big City Trip

    by: Theday Author IconMail Icon
Tim walked around the car and got into the passenger's side door and felt the car sink a bit under his weight while Jim looked over with a slight smile.
"So, what's the surprise?" Tim asked egger to know what his skinny boy friend had in mind.
"We're going to the big city for the weekend!" Jim announced with a smile on his face," I thought it would be a good idea to get out of this hole for a few days before you have to start your summer job."
Tim had to admit he was quite surprised and he was not looking forward to his fast food job at the local Burger Barn.
"I already reserved a hotel room for tonight, so we better get you home and pack," Jim suggested.
"What about you?" Tim asked.
"My bag is in the back seat already," Jim said and motioned towards the backseat where his duffle bag sat," A weekend of shopping and relaxing will be good for both of us."
"Sounds good to me," Tim agreed.
"Plus, I arranged something special.." Jim hinted at as he started up the car.
"What..?" Tim asked curious again.
"I'm not telling, you'll find out later tonight," Jim told and back up and drove down the road.

It didn't take Tim long to pack and tell his folks he was going for a trip with Jim. Tim had saved a bit of money while on his latest diet and was ready to splurge.
Back in the car it was a 4 hour drive to the big city and the boys listened to Tim's iPod while making plans for the weekend, including hitting up the aquarium, the ultra huge mall, a saucy gay underwear store and a few little tourist traps. But Jim kept his little surprise quiet, not budging for a second, only saying that it started at 8pm that night.
The boy arrived at their 3 star hotel, which offered a wonderful price and right downtown so it was within walking distance of a ton of places.
"So what's the surprise?" Tim asked lying on the bed.

What does Jim have planned?
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