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Chapter #7

"I want to go someplace a little more private."

    by: Devilyote Author IconMail Icon
The depth of Ash's voice was particularly striking when he spoke. As he started to walk away from the Whackbat field, he left huge pawprints in the dirt, each at least the size of the tallest creature there! Typically awkward and consistently unsure, Ash came across now as cool and confident, a rather becoming trait, at least to Kristofferson. He had demonstrated impressive patience putting up with his cousin's quirks; even if his sudden change was merely temporary, it was pleasing to know that Ash had it within him to be those things he'd dreamed of. Kristofferson smiled thinly as he placed his hand on top of Ash's shoulder and looked him in the eye. "Where did you have in mind?" he asked, not even questioning the motivation of relocating somewhere private.

Ash had detected something different about Kristofferson since he'd grown, a kind of admiration toward him he'd never felt. Is this what it was like to be respected? No, there was something more to it than that. Concealing his suspicion for at least the time being, Ash gave his cousin a gentle pat with the tip of his finger and pointed toward somewhere in the distance, "There's a pond I used to go to when I needed to escape, I've never seen another living thing there. I'd really like to show it to you."

"That sounds nice," Kristofferson said, watching the field disappear from view, "You know... now that everybody's seen you, your dad's going to find out, right?"

The thought honestly hadn't crossed Ash's mind. "Uh..."

"Don't worry about it. Your parents were going to find out before long anyway. Let's just make the most of this while we can."

"Make the most of this?" Ash wondered, "What exactly does he have in mind?" Ash couldn't help but quirk an eye and glance at his cousin as he continued to plod across the countryside. After several minutes filled with largely uneventful chatter, both travelers arrived at a gently-sloped, forested hill over which neither creature could see. The trees, once tall and great in comparison to Ash, were barely as tall as he now. Just how much had he grown? Kristofferson appeared smaller than ever atop his shoulder, and that was perfectly fine with the diminutive fox. "It's just over this hill," Ash said, "and then we're there."

Ash was careful not to lose Kristofferson as he maneuvered between the trees. The sun was high in the sky, and the temperature was mild but warm. As he pushed between the last pair of trees near the bottom of the other side of the hill, a small flock of birds scattered and re-settled somewhere else amidst the trees. Having reached his destination, Ash found himself in front of the pond he'd often slipped away to since he was very young. The water looked particularly refreshing after the afternoon's excitement, and Ash let Kristofferson down before getting down on all fours to take a drink. The banana-shaped fruit he'd been carrying slipped out of his pocket and rolled to the ground; to Kristofferson's surprise, it was much, much bigger than he'd first witnessed, and brightly glowing!

"Ash!" Kristofferson exclaimed, "The fruit!" Ash collected it into his palm and examined it closely. He had begun to tingle all over, like he had during the brilliant flash of light in the sewers. Ash's clothes, already tight and revealing, began to become even moreso, and he bared his teeth as if in pain. "Are you alright?" Kristofferson asked, yelling with the full power of his voice.

"Ohhhh..." Ash whined, "Unnnghhh..!"

Kristofferson's eyes widened as his cousin experienced another potent growth spurt. The fox's gigantic footpaw crept toward him in quick fits, swelling with the rest of his body. Shaking off his immediate shock, Kristofferson scurried away from the path of Ash's toes and watched as they doubled in size, then doubled again, almost in no time at all!

"Holy cuss," Kristofferson panted, rarely one to swear. This moment, however, called for an exception.

Without thinking, Ash hurled the fruit into the pond. Splash! The water was deep enough to hide it, though its glow, slowly dying, persisted from within. The tingling sensation within Ash was fierce but subsiding. As he continued to grow, he backed up away from the pond and took a seat, snapping several trees beneath his mighty figure, then clutched his head. The titanic fox was completely naked now, and fully exposed, which Kristofferson duly noted. Had Ash always been so gifted, or did the fruit enhance his sexual attributes as well as his height and physique? The monstrous fox looked fully grown-up, yet still remarkably youthful. Not even realizing that he was unclothed, Ash scanned the ground for Kristofferson, his tail flicking about. Dazed with the intensity of his growth spurt, he hadn't even noticed that his massive erection was jutting out between his legs and leaking a steady stream of precum into the field of grass by the foot of the pond.

Kristofferson could do little but stare. A sense of jealousy within him was quickly overcome with awe, and he presented himself to his cousin. "Ash," he said, perhaps inaudibly to the enormous fox, "What's going on..?"

Ash reached forward to scoop up Kristofferson and squinted as he studied him close in front of his muzzle. "I feel really funny," he sighed. Kristofferson felt like he needed to meditate just to get his bearings now. What on earth were they going to do? How big was Ash going to get?? Still, despite the emergency, he couldn't deny his urges; Kristofferson stepped to the edge of Ash's palm, trying to catch an eyeful of his cousin's foxhood. The air around him smelled deeply of sex, only adding to Kristofferson's excitement. It was truly massive and red, bigger than anything he had imagined. If Ash were normal-sized, he'd still be at least twice as big as anyone else. Even Kristofferson's own foxhood, impressively large, paled in comparison.

"Ash, you're so..." he said nervously, his voice trailing off. Though gigantic, Ash's ears were sensitive enough to hear him.

"What should we do?" Ash asked, his voice rumbling through Kristofferson and the hill underneath.

Kristofferson had an idea...

You have the following choices:

1. Enough with the charade. Kristofferson wants Ash BADLY.

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2. Something else.

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