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Chapter #6

Scream (Ben Breaks free of her mental hold)

    by: James Sitka Author IconMail Icon
This is just too much for you; you can't take it anymore. You slowly begin to realize this is your new life from now on, absolute slavery to Melinda and Kira, and soon everyone else that she knows that hates you. As you think of this, a feeling of utter horror envelopes you and you do the only thing in your power to do. You scream at the top of your lungs, your anger, your fear, and your fury all released in that awful cry.

Of course, your scream starts drawing attention (or at least the attention of those that weren't already mocking you), but now Melinda starts feeling uneasy. "Shut up bitch," she orders you.

But you don't go silent, you continue screaming even as the thought more of her tortures come to your mind. Suddenly you realize she just gave you a command and you didn't obey; her hypnosis was slipping. I just have to fight it more, you think to yourself. You continue screaming, this time louder than before, and now you start thrashing on the ground, your fury bent on floor around you.

Now Melinda is really feeling nervous, she just realized that she ordered you to stop and you disobeyed. "Alright, let's go," she says tugging on your leash. But you don't go, instead your tantrum becomes more wild and you start tugging on the end of your leash. "Stop it!" she yells. "I order you!" but it's no use, you scream and holler and resist until the point of exhuastion. All of a sudden you stop and all is quiet. You slowly get up, take of the collar, despite her orders not to, and stand there.

"I did it," you say, "I'm free"

"Not so fast Benny," she says whipping out her necklace again, but you are on guard and turn away and shut your eyes. "Yoi think this is over? You think you've won?" she taunts. "don't make me laugh. I can get you back anytime and I will hypnotize you again, and when I do I'll make you wish you had never broken free."

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