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Micky is a 13 year old dude who spend his summer with his family.

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Chapter #8

Sergeant Crawly

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You didn't want to waste another second of your life inside this granny's shoe. You looked at the sides. Her foot was too fat for you to make it alive. You looked under her foot. There was a little space for you to crawl under. You tried to avoid this, but that was the way to freedom. You gave a little amen before you set off your mission. you got low to the shoe, until your pressed down on the shoe, and you were able to smell the unnecessary oder of all time. You slowly slid inch by inch, until you were no more than 5 inches away from her toes. You then quickly crawled past her meaty toes, and under her foot.

The heat has went up, and you were as sweaty as her foot. Suddenly she started pounding her foot up and down. "Either she's ticklish or she feels me." You didn't like it, so you stood in place. In moments, she stopped all the pounding. Instead, her foot lowered even more. Your tongue came in contact with her foot. You weren't able to put your tongue back in, nor were you able to move. She lowered her foot too much, that you were now trapped, with your tongue licking her foot. You were able to move by the amount of sweat around you, but you couldn't fit your tongue back in your mouth. So for the time of the trip, you had to slide your tongue along her foot, tasting the devastating taste of a gym sock stuffed in a armpit. You tried to hold in your tears, as you made it to the arch of her foot. It gave you a chance to breathe.

Now all was left was for you to climb up her heel and get the hell out of here. You began to crawl under the heel, as it placed a harsh weight of you. You thought you wouldn't make it, but you did. When you were on the other side, you could see a light above. You placed your back on her heel, and attempted to climb up. You successfully made it, but were you noticed?

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