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Shrink, grow, transform, mind control - all in your power! What are you going to do?

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Chapter #5

The train

    by: rockstatic Author IconMail Icon
You're stunned and thrilled when the crowd looks at themselves in confusion and simply walks onto the train. The woman's giant steps take you onto the train yourself without too much incident; her swings up and down make your stomach feel a little woozy like on an amusement park ride, but you took care to wrap yourself tightly in the ornamental bow on her shoe. Fortunately, the swinging eventually stops, as the woman finds a seat on the train and sits down. You hold on tight for a few seconds, just to make sure, but once the doors shut and the train starts moving, you feel relatively confident going out and wandering around. You slowly slide off the side of her shoe and take a look at your surroundings.

Across the aisle is some guy in a business suit. It's still amazing to see giants acting with the casual indifference of everyday life, but that's no good. You peek out from under your seat, being careful not to move out into the aisle where you can be stepped on, and you see in the seat behind you, across the aisle, an older woman, apparently in her 50s or 60s. You turn back and walk the few steps back over towards the foot of the woman you rode into the train. You look up at her, but at this point all you can see is up to her knees. You frown.

Giving your neck a rest from all that looking up, you realize you can walk all the way under the seats. This is a big deal, because it lets you walk as far back or forward as you want. As long as you don't get caught underfoot or sighted, there's really nowhere you can't go.

As it turns out, though, you get lucky the first time. You go one seat behind your gracious hostess and you discover a truly hot girl. She's wearing a pink T-shirt and jeans, and though she has blonde hair and blue eyes, and one hell of a physique, you can see a lot of thought in her eyes. She seems like she's in her mid-20s, and she's too caught up reading a book to notice you. Best of all, her handbag is on the floor. It wouldn't be too tough for you at all to climb on inside and see where she takes you. She looks professional and fascinating. This might be fun.

Then, you hear a bit of a thump behind you. You turn around, and on the ground you see another purse, this one a little more drab and gray. You didn't have much time on the platform for this stuff, but now that you think about it, that woman was pretty good-looking for a woman in her mid-30s. She seemed well put together, and you're kind of curious as to what her home life or work life is like. You could climb into her purse pretty easily too.

You have the following choices:

1. Go with the hot chick

2. Go with the older woman

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