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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Detective · #1004572

007-style superspy action... on a different scale.

This choice: climb down to the tank top strap  •  Go Back...
Chapter #9

Never broke the rules

    by: GreenReaper Author IconMail Icon
As much as this position was beneficial to you, your mind was telling you to move. You looked down and saw the strap of Rachel's tank top. You released your grip and began to slide down Rachel's neck until you touched the strap of her top. Soon, Rachel's enormous hand appeared and began to scratch the tattoo area. You knew there was a chance she would feel you when you made those kinds of movements, but for now, you dodges this bullet.

You climbed onto the strap and activated your gloves to avoid falling. From here, you could see Rachel's enormous arm gripping the steering wheel. It was clear she'd worked it out. With just one movement of her bicep, she could destroy you, not to mention her colossal breasts. It would take you half an hour or more to climb all that. For now, you just sat on top of Rachel's chest. The darkness in that area helped, as Adella looked at Rachel and didn't seem to notice your presence.

Rachel arrives at the window and a young voice greets them, Rachel hands over the money and takes the bag of hamburgers and puts it on her thighs, the car moves and parks in the parking lot of the food establishment.

Rachel takes out the burger that for you was the size of a mansion and slowly you see how the burger gets closer to Rachel's face, her lips open so wide that it seemed like she was going to devour the entire burger in one bite, she takes a huge bite which makes you hear the sound of the sauce and the ingredients of the burger sticking out of the back of the bun, Rachel chewed and chewed while small pieces fell on top of you, it was like small stones but even so you take caution so that one of those pieces doesn't push you.

"Mmmmm, gosh, this tastes amazing." Rachel continued eating until a large portion of the sauce stained her lips. Then she lifted her napkin.

After she finishes cleaning herself, she throws the napkin out the car window. Then she takes out the other burger. Just like with the first one, she takes a big bite and starts eating. But halfway through, you hear the sound of a vibrating phone. You don't know where it's coming from, but by the time you look at Rachel's face, she already has the phone in her ear.

"What do you want?......I told you I'd take my break.....Where's Nicole?"

Judging by Rachel's face, it doesn't seem like good news.

"I'm on my way, Just keep that asshole in the room, Is he sedated?.....Okay," Rachel ends the call. You can only see her annoyed face as she begins to move the car.

"Of all nights, it had to be this one, and that fucking bitch doesn't want to do her fucking job. If it weren't for her position, I'd shove her fucking head in a toilet full of shit!"

Her voice is truly thunderous like that of a furious goddess, she would be a threat in a fight.

You looked at Adella, and she seemed to want to say something, but her nervousness prevented her from doing so.

"Is it really...very serious?"

"Of course it is!! Phew, look, don't think the customers at the club have total freedom just because they have a lot of money. There are rules, and those who break them are punished."

"So, he broke one of those rules?"

"The second time he does it, we all get three chances depending on the rule. Nicole is the one in charge of deciding the punishment. That includes disappearing you without a trace, but since she's a lazy bitch, she sent it to me, and that's more work for me.

"God, is she really like this with you all the time?"

"Only when she wants to, but forget about that."

After that, there was silence. Now, considering what you heard from Rachel, they have rules. You don't know what they are, but if you break any of them, they could even kill you.

"Jack, do you copy?" How are things going?"

"I'm about to get to the club, but something happened. A club member broke some kind of rule, and soon they're going to torture or even kill him."

"Then it's bad, but you know that rescuing isn't the mission, Jack. If they discover you, you'll be next."

"I know, but there's something I have to ask you. Do you know anything about a Nicole? She seems to be someone above Rachel."

"Give me a minute... and here she is. Her name is Nicole Maderik. According to the report from the fallen agents, she's the one in charge of purchasing and distributing drugs. She's also the one who tortures and even uses her enemies as test subjects for her new drugs."

Now you understand why she's the one in charge of punishments and why the club has sedatives, but it's still strange that she didn't want to participate and made Rachel take her place.

"What does she look like?"

"Woman in her 30s, dark hair, dark lipstick, seems like someone who really likes hard rock."

"I appreciate the information, Officer Sanchez."

"That's what I'm here for, Agent Jack."

It's always strange that Sanchez always uses your first name and not your last name, but you're used to it.

Soon you feel the car stop and you see that you're now in a parking lot.

"Listen, babe, if you want to earn that position, you must be completely honest with your answers. No lies will be accepted, understood?"

"I understand... there's no turning back."

And with that, Rachel gets out of the car, and once again you feel the cold breeze from outside. The drive isn't long, as they arrive at a door marked "staff only." She rings what appears to be a doorbell, and after a few seconds, the door opens, revealing a woman with short blue hair who appears to be holding some kind of lollipop.

"I guess she's the new one?"

"You should know that by now. The naughty one is still in the room?"

"You should know that by now."

Rachel just gives her the middle finger, while the girl in blue smiles at the gesture. She then gestures with her hand to Adella, making her understand that she should follow her.

Upon entering, you see a small room with several hallways, one of which leads to the upper floor.

"And where's Nicole?"

"I don't know, she said something about not calling her while she's in heaven."

"Really?.....I'm really going to take it out on the naughty."

"Is it that bad?"

With that, Rachel starts to walk in another path while Adella and the other girl take the path to the upper floor. As Rachel continued walking, you could hear the music getting louder. You activate your ant suit and prepare for what's coming. Rachel opens the door and you are greeted by a dark environment illuminated by small, flashing colored lights and too many people in the place. You knew the place was big, but this is on another level. There was a huge dance floor where people were dancing. As Rachel moved through the crowd, you activated your night vision goggles and prepared for your next move.

You know where Rachel is going, but you're not sure if she'll go straight to the guy. Another thing you could do would be to find another way in this huge place. There must be other areas of the club where you can explore and maybe find Nicole to learn how she operates and distributes the drugs.
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