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007-style superspy action... on a different scale.

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Chapter #6

Obedience Training

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She lifts you up to her face so that your eyes meet. "Now the first thing we need to do is to make sure you're a good little man from now on and do what your mistress says rather than going round the place messing up Daddy's plans. Can you do that? Can you be a good little boy for Lena?". Your training has prepared you for most things but being baby-talked by a beautiful girl who can hold you in the palm of her hand isn't one of them. To your surprise and horror, you find yourself nodding in agreement.

She sets you down on the floor and crouches above you. You cower aware as you stare up at her massive knees overhanging you.

"Sit" she says. You do nothing, unable to believe what is happening. She repeats the command.

When you fail to do it a second time, she tells you to sit a third time - this time prodding you with her index finger so you fall onto your bottom.

You stand up again and try to protest. Lena merely repeats the command as though she doesn't think you understood. Again and again this happens - you trying to protest your rights as a human and her merely repeating the command to sit as though you were a dumb animal. It's a battle of wills. With most people, you'd win one of those with ease but there's something about how commanding and calm she is - mixed with how much bigger than you she is, and of course how beautiful she is - that overpowers you. Eventually you give up and sit to the floor.

"Good boy" she gushes, stroking you with her finger and then pulling you to your feet again. "Now, sit again". Ten times she makes you sit until she is certain you will obey the command.

She then stands up and walks about two metres away (or to you about forty metres). "Here, boy" she calls.

Again you try to resist but again she calmly and firmly repeats the command until - almost without realising it - you find yourself trotting over to her.

She repeats the trick with "stay", "jump", "roll over", "lie down" and even "fetch" until eventually you find yourself broken and ready to obey any command she gives you.

Eventually she picks you up and nuzzles you affectionately. "I can't believe how quickly you've become such a well-behaved obedient little man. You're such a good little thing." A part of you shudders as you realise how proud you feel about her praise and how keen you are to earn more of it. You kiss her finger and she giggles.

She places you back in your cage and gazes in at you, beaming at you. "Now I've got to go and do big people things for a while. But I'll be back later to give you a treat to reward you for how well behaved you've become. Bye-bye for now". She waves at you and then you watch her disappear.

As soon as she is gone you start to pine for her and desperately want to come back. Like it or not, you truly are her pet now.
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