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by Sandi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E · In & Out · Romance/Love · #1138015
some poem i did wen i was 15.. Novice stuff =D hehe..
I couldn't believe the words that came out,
fast and lethal like bullets, from your mouth.
They hit and they did very precise
Right smack in my heart which turned cold as ice
For a while I could feel nothing, only numbness i knew
And watched it rip to pieces, the beautiful picture of us which i drew

I could speak not a word without choking,
my breath so ragged and dry lips trembling.
My voice thick with tears that I held back
whilst nursing the wound inflicted by your attack.

You talked on still explaining why
You had to leave. I wanted to die.
'Ok' and 'yeah' was all i could say.
I could do nothing since you felt that way.
Just meekly abiding by your decision
Of separating was my conclusion.

Then you hung up with the agreement
of being friends still. Your idea of an atonement.
The whole conversation left me feeling so empty,
like i never ever again will be happy.

Later, contemplating on the whole situation
I suddenly came to a realisation.
I had to work hard on the more important things
And quit mulling over what was never meant to be.

Though sad, i guess I'm glad we broke up.
I don't care who was the one that got dumped.
You opened my eyes to the things more imperative
than the shallow idea of a weak relationship.

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