(This message was edited by starleafgirl on 12-03-04 @ 11:52 pm EST)
You have some very good points, thank you! :)
In reality, while I like to boast that I have 13 main characters, in my head I only focused on two or three at a time. But that's no excuse. Anyway, I hope to write another part sometime, and the Introduction is meant to give some insight into all the characters.
Um, I'm going to stop rambling now, thanks again for stopping by! :)
P.S. what I meant to say was: I always planned for subsequent "Chapters" to have a smaller focus; I just wanted to get all the characters out there in the Introduction.
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