It contains a suggestion. It is a good poem. The atmosphere suits a perfect Ghazal. But a mistake, mention in the review, does allow it to be a perfect Ghazal. I mention it at the beginning in blue letter. I think, it is that suggestion which will help the poet to createe perfect Ghazal poems.
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