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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Other · #1433010
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Feb 20, 2023 at 9:28pm
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Re: Re: request for review "oxen of the sun"
thank you for the review, I appreciate your kind words, and i agree that the sentence about the crash being "rather blase" does feel anachronistic to the story.
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