Everyone did a great job. I really like how Natalie was developed. (Hopefully, she might pop up in some other place ) Also, I always thought Gillian was a bit mysterious and that was kept well here. (Would actually like to know her conversations with Braydon and her thoughts, but that is for our imaginations.) Too bad for Braydon, or maybe not. Who knows?
Several alternate options look interesting. Of course, there's lots throughout the interactive.
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