With "Revisiting a Legacy" , I start a pretty lengthy arc of eight chapters detailing a lot of Mireya's past, but also introducing some new content I worked out with Seuzz.
As the story progresses, I'll leave here some notes regarding what I'll introduce, but the three key parts are mentioned here: the Bioethical Institute, the character of Maribella Aristizábal (Mireya's mother) and Dr. Gustavo. These may be out of order regarding their actual introduction, but they'll serve as a way to provide insight on how and why they're developed.
Any questions or comments are welcome. Also: a ton of apologies for all the Spanish dialogue, but as you may notice, it's meant to reflect that Mireya's traveling to a location where few people are expected to speak English, and also to show that, despite her own comment, she *is* well-versed in Spanish, much as John suggests. (She just prefers to speak English, that's all.) The dialogue should be relatively easy to understand, though.
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