Interesting. After re-reading "The Voice Inside My Head" , I guess it might come across that Will is laughing at the end of the chapter because he's doing it for his own amusement. That wasn't my intention. I was aiming more for a "It worked!" sort of laugh.
Anyway, I don't think Will's being petty with his actions over Breeanna. Admittedly I have the benefit of knowing exactly all the reasons why he's doing this. At least after "#FreeBreeanna" we see what he's come for - the anima band. You may even be able to hazard a guess why he needs it.
What I found vilainous about this arc is that Will uses Breeanna's own voice inside her head to carry out the gaslighting. Breeanna isn't just being tricked into disbelieving her own thoughts and memories, they're being used against her without her even realising. Brrrrr....
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