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Nov 6, 2020 at 11:37am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning ...
by imaj
Interesting. After re-reading "The Voice Inside My Head, I guess it might come across that Will is laughing at the end of the chapter because he's doing it for his own amusement. That wasn't my intention. I was aiming more for a "It worked!" sort of laugh.

Anyway, I don't think Will's being petty with his actions over Breeanna. Admittedly I have the benefit of knowing exactly all the reasons why he's doing this. At least after "#FreeBreeanna we see what he's come for - the anima band. You may even be able to hazard a guess why he needs it.

What I found vilainous about this arc is that Will uses Breeanna's own voice inside her head to carry out the gaslighting. Breeanna isn't just being tricked into disbelieving her own thoughts and memories, they're being used against her without her even realising. Brrrrr....
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In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning Is Issued · 11-02-20 1:00pm
by imaj
Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning Is Issued · 11-05-20 2:07am
by Nostrum
Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning Is Issued · 11-05-20 2:26am
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning Is Issued · 11-05-20 1:38pm
by imaj
Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning Is I... · 11-05-20 3:18pm
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Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning Is I... · 11-05-20 9:05pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning ... · 11-06-20 4:42am
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warn... · 11-06-20 9:34pm
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*Star* Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warning ... · 11-06-20 11:37am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warn... · 11-06-20 11:45am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A ... · 11-06-20 1:07pm
by imaj
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A Warn... · 11-06-20 9:52pm
by Nostrum
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung & A ... · 11-07-20 9:27am
by imaj
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung ... · 11-07-20 6:09pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is H... · 11-07-20 9:00pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In Which A Lampshade Is Hung ... · 11-08-20 11:23am
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by imaj

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