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Do you want five thousand GPs? Just get a five-rating review from me and you get it.
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May 27, 2020 at 1:54pm
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Just a novel writer needing a review ;-;
https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2222877-Loner-Rehabilitation-Prog...

^ Idk if I was supposed to copy the link, but anyways my item ID is : #2222877

I only wrote the prologue so far, but it's 4.5k words. I just want a review to make sure I'm starting the story correctly.

The full summary of the novel (which I couldn't put due to the 90 characters limit) is :

On planet Earth, Adrian lived a happy life with his loving family. However, just by accidentally falling into a small pond of rainwater, he was transported to another world (isekai basically), out of pure mistake, and can no longer go back home.

Now on planet Soluvia, Adrian has to learn how to survive with his newfound companion, Ash, who seemed to be in the critical condition of "amnesia." Hoping for another person to go on an adventure with, Adrian got a slap to the face when he became a teacher after being granted a human companion out of one of the many gods' and goddesses' gifts.

Feeling dejected, the higher beings told Adrian that there is a chance for him and the hero to go back to their own world once the threat of Soluvia disappears. Now having a goal in mind, Adrian works hard to teach Ash, as well as make himself stronger, in order to possibly help the hero and return home much sooner.
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Just a novel writer needing a review ;-; · 05-27-20 1:54pm
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Re: Just a novel writer needing a review ;-; · 05-29-20 3:57am
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Re: Re: Just a novel writer needing a review ;-; · 05-29-20 5:16pm
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