October Novel Prep Challenge

@Joy Thanks for the trinket. I am a sea and boat person. Raised for a bit on my dads fishing boat.

To everyone.- I put a few blank lines then the ** and then a few more blank lines so the break is quite apparent.

She and her family are helping to protect a village of human mind readers, aliens from another galaxy. I didn't realize how difficult it was going to be with POV but it's proved difficult with the mind reading, everyone's feelings apparent to everyone except Lili and her family. Then Eli awakens that power within her. There isn't enough to change povs at chapters. Otherwise I'd have chapters 2-3 paragraphs long, or even one paragraph.

I needed to know I was doing it right, or if not, at lest that it made sense and wasn't confusing.

Thanks so much. You've been a big help.