I was just reading your entry, and yes, on the balance it did not focus as directly on the setting as I had in mind, and the other submittals show. Would you like to tweak it a little more first in light of this - though the other parts were good - just doesn't quite meet the "rules"
Thanks,
Laurie
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Have something to say, and say it as clearly as you can. That is the only secret. - Matthew Arnold
The following section applies to this forum item as a whole,
not this individual post.
Any feedback sent through it will go to the forum's
owner, Willowgreen.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/message_id/2386784
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.13 seconds at 3:08pm on Nov 11, 2024 via server WEBX2.