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Rated: E · Message Forum · Reviewing · #1600472

I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.

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Apr 9, 2012 at 12:20am
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review request for a short story
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Hey there,

Hope you could review this short story. It's about 1900 words long:

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Disclosure (for what it's worth): This was originally the first chapter of a novel. I couldn't really get going with the overall plot and didn't want to throw this chapter away (I thought it was decent lol) so I transformed it into a short story and intend to submit it for publication. The last 1/3 part (below the slashes - you'll see what I mean if you review) is largely what I added to make it into a short story.

Hope you enjoy and, of course, many thanks in advance,

WoK
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review request for a short story · 04-09-12 12:20am
by Wrath.of.Khan Author IconMail Icon

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