Flash Fiction Contest--300 words or less

Hello, Okghost. Thank you for entering my contest.

I enjoyed reading THE HIDDEN PASSAGEWAY. It was incredibly spooky. One of my favorite parts:

She felt cold flesh touch her arm and then it began to pull her into the room. Teara screamed, but there was no one to help her. “I don't want to know the family secret,” she cried over and over, but it was to late.

It reminds me of a bad dream. (Sometimes when watching a movie, I have to remind myself, It's only a movie.)

If this were a static item, posted in bitem format, I would rate it at 4.5.

Thank you for posting your work to my 300-word flash fiction contest. If you are not pleased with any of my comments, please let me know. Otherwise, remember that these are merely my comments; I don't know everything; and you are the author!

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