Striking and well crafted with a good backstory, easily engaged with by the reader. I particularly enjoyed the contrasts..
It scanned well on the page, as well as working when read aloud. I really enjoyed it, and the neat simple conclusion was easily identifiable and feelings mutually shared by any mother.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
Shani Phethean-Hubble
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