I'm not saying show don't tell but I want to show it as well as tell it. She's already telling where she is going by her saying she never should have gotten involved with people in the first place. I just want to show her withdrawing along with that.
The show don't tell thing hasn't been discussed since I've been here, but that's only been a few weeks.
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