I think it'll really be a matter of contrasting her previous behavior against her current behavior and how she responds to the renewed isolation. Sometimes, that's all it takes to "show" something.
(BTW, I am not a big fan of the "show, don't tell" rule. I think it is often misunderstood and misinterpreted -- have we discussed "show, don't tell" yet?)
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