But im afraid that its too complicated for the masses, but i dont want to dumb it down
This sounds like you don't respect your readers. That's a big no, no. Readers/listeners are equal partners in the storytelling business. Would you want to listen to someone who thought you were dumb?
The writers role in the writer-reader partnership is to tell the story in such a way that the reader can lose themselves in the story and enjoy the telling. If you can't do that, then you're not doing your job.
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