I want to get from a review just what the reader enjoyed, hated... also typos, grammatical errors and that sort of thing.
The main thing that i want to know... does it turn the reader on, I mean that is what we are all essentially trying to do... bring the reader into the story, let them feel the emotion/feelings/sensations the characters are feeling without it seeming like it is just being told.
I have had very few people actually tell me that they thought something was a turn on... and well it is a little bit of a taboo area of conversation, so i can understand why people are a little shy about it, but if you're going to read the erotica i feel you should let the writer know what has worked and what hasn't.
The following section applies to this forum item as a whole,
not this individual post.
Any feedback sent through it will go to the forum's
owner, Petronella60 -on hiatus.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/forums/message_id/1010346
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.08 seconds at 7:50am on Nov 14, 2024 via server WEBX1.