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Jan 29, 2005 at 5:52am
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Re: Question: Being reviewed and reviewing?
by A Non-Existent User
I want to get from a review just what the reader enjoyed, hated... also typos, grammatical errors and that sort of thing.

The main thing that i want to know... does it turn the reader on, I mean that is what we are all essentially trying to do... bring the reader into the story, let them feel the emotion/feelings/sensations the characters are feeling without it seeming like it is just being told.

I have had very few people actually tell me that they thought something was a turn on... and well it is a little bit of a taboo area of conversation, so i can understand why people are a little shy about it, but if you're going to read the erotica i feel you should let the writer know what has worked and what hasn't.

Anyways thats just my thoughts lol *Bigsmile*




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