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| [Introduction]
"Welcome to Camp Blood." That's what all the other children said when she arrived. Julie was barely 10, when her parents sent her to Cooking Camp. Where they teach children to cook for themselves. She went to her bunk and met Susan, a snob; Francine(Freddy), a French exchange student, and little ol' Jannie, she's 8 the youngest of the four. now run with it, Who's eating who? Who's eating you? |
| Julie sat on her bunk with tears in her eyes. Why did her parents have to send her to Cooking Camp? Julie hated cooking, why would anybody cook over a hot stove for people who probably wouldn't appreciate it? She thought to herself. "Hello girls" the camp Chefette announced."My name is Karen and I'll be your Chefette, that's a camp counslor. Now unpack and be ready in 15 minutes for the tour of our new kitchen and meet our new chef. I hear he's fabulous. So let's get going, I'll be right back." Then she left. The girls moved very quickly to get their things put away. When they were finished, they sat down on their bunks and started talking. "I heard that they call this place Camp Blood," said Susan. "I heard the camp was once run by a chef that loved to use human body parts in all of his meals. He would hunt down some campers that were out past the cufew, snare them in some sort of trap, so they would still be alive. Come and pick them up and take them back to that huge freezer that they closed up. Then when he prepared a meal using any kind of meat he would go to the freezer and...... Karen walked in. |
| "Listen up everyone!The tour is about to start," said Karen loudly so everyone could hear her.Everybody lined up right behind the Cheffete and got ready for the tour.Karen led them through a door and said,"This is our kitchen.This is where all the cooking will be done.As you all can see our cooking utensils are quite old and so are the other cooking facilities. Julie and Susan stared around in disgust."This place looks ancient.It must have been here for some time," Julie said to Susan. Karen continued to make her way.After walking a few steps they saw... The new chef. |
| He held a knife in one hand and a frying pan in the other"Welcome to my kitchen I do hope you enjoy it here". He reached over and grabbed some carrots as he started chopping them in pieces. Susan and Karen stared at one another as Julie sighed"Oh yeah I'm sure we'll have the time of our lives". |
| The cook showed them some more things with very sharp objects and then they had to get changed to go swimming. Even though its a cooking school its also camp so why wouldn't they go swimming. They had a wonderful time swimming it was on their way back that no one liked. "Oh, that was fun even though the pool had tones of bugs in it"Susan said. "Ouch"Every one heard Janie say. When eveyone looked back to see what was wrong they saw that Janie was on the ground crying with a big peice of glass in her foot, she wasn't wearing shoes. |
| "Jannie where's your shoes at?" Freddy asked. "I left them down by the lake, when we were swimming." Jannie replied. "I'll go get them." said Julie. She turned around and followed the trail back down to the lake. She serched the shore against the river, but couldn't find Jannie's shoes. As she kept looking, she heard a big "thud" behind her. She turned around and saw nothing. She heard , what sounded like muffled cry's, coming from just around a huge Oak tree, and proceeded to investigate. As she approached the tree, the cries became louder, almost as if someone was being muffled by someone elses hands, and trying to get some attention. As she rounded the tree, not too cautiously, she almost fell into a deep pit, covered by leaves and branches. Her feet teetered the edge of the blackened pit, but she grabbed onto the tree. "God, that was a close one." She said out loud, but to herself. She loosened her hug from around the tree, and felt a push. She immediately fell into the pit with a thud{/}. She tried to move, but her left leg was in tremendious pain. "Damnit" she started. "I was pushed, but who would push me." Her mind quickly remembering the talk with the girls, about the last chef, who liked to cook and serve campers. |
| Without thinking twice, Julie stared up from the pit to get a look at the person behind all this.All she saw was the person's head pass by. Julie tried to stand up but she immediatly fell back because of the amount of pressure on her poor leg."Must have sprained or crammed my leg due to the bloody fall," she said in agony. It is starting to get late and her friends are getting worried."I think we should go and look for her, or we should maybe tell the Chefette," said Jammie in a worried tone. Just as she said that.......... |
| The chef entered the room and smiled"There you are I've been looking all over for you". Jammie shook her head as she replied"We were down by the lake swimming if you must know". The chef nodded as he responded"Well you must be hungry come to the kitchen and I'll fix you something delicious to eat ok?" Karen shrugged her shoulders as she answered"Maybe later right now we're going to go look for Julie she's been gone for a few hours now and it's getting late". The chef nodded as he grabbed his hat"Well then I'll be more than happy to help you look for her". Jammie stared at the others as she replied"Alright then let's go"they made their way out the door as one thing lingered on all their minds could this chef really be trusted? |
| They started off by the lake. Scence Julie walked off towards the other side of camp to see what the noise was they were no where near where she was they all had to go to their cabin because it was late. The next morning the hunt began again. |
| "Julie! Where are you?" everyone shouted. They received no answers. They walked around the lake, and kept calling her name, but no answer. Julie woke up, but she was no longer in the dark pit. She didn't know where she was. As she started to get up, she left a sharp pain in her stomach, and looked. Screams....Screams.....Screams..... She was cut open, gutted like a fish. She clutches her stomach where the cut is. It feels bulky to her, she reaches inside the cut. She feels something hard and round, and pulls it out. Screams.....Screams....Screams...... She pulls out cut pieces of carrots and potatoes, celery and onions. "Shit, I'm....I'm a stew." She yelled. Suddenly, she awoke from this nightmare. |
| "Calm down Julie, calm down.It's only a stupid nightmare," she said to herself trying to remember what is going on."What's going to happen to me?I'm almost starved to death and I haven't drank any water for about two days, mummbled Julie to herself. She is so frightened that she starts talking to herself, trying to lose her fear.Suddenly she hears the cracking of twigs.It sounds like someones foot steps and it is getting closer, and closer.Then it stops.In fear she looks up from the hole and sees......... |
| Karen stared at her as she smiled"Julie are you ok?"she nodded as the others ran over and helped her out of the pit. "Man am I glad that's over"Julie muttered as Karen helped her to her feet. The chef smiled as he spoke"Well I'm glad to see that you're ok now let's go back and get somethng to eat shall we?" Julie rubbed her stomach as she nodded"Yeah I'm starved let's go ok?"the others nodded as they followed the chef back to the kitchen to eat. |
| "I had the strangest dream while i was in that hole" Julie told everyone once they had gotton back to the cabin to go to bed. Karen came in looked aroung and said "don't look so glum you've got a great day ahead of you tomorrow".And with that she shut off the lights and walked to her own cabin with Chef. |
| The next morning the girls awoke to the sound of a sream! "Wake up girls, where is Freddy?" Asked Karen. Julie opens her eyes and scrambles to Freddy's bed. She is looking for some clues, she believes that the new chef is killing people. As she approched the bed, she noticed tiny dark spots on the floor beside the bed. She looked closer and realized they were blood droplets. "Karen, something awful has happened to Freddy, I just know it." Julie said. "Look, I found some blood by her bed." All the girls hudle around Freddy's bed to look at the blood. "Maybe she started her period? Asked Jannie. "Don't be ridiculous, Freddy is too young for that, I haven't started mine yet, and I'm more of a woman then she is." Said Susan in her snobish attitude. "That's enough girls, we have got to find Freddy." Said Karen. "Let's start looking around for clues to where she might be." Karen finished. They all started looking around and found a trail of those tiny blood droplets, they headed out the door. "Come on, Julie started. I found more blood leading outside, lets follow them." So they all followed the blood, until they came to another deep, dark pit, only this one had a tunnel dug through it on the bottom. They jump down into the pit, and follow Karen through the tunnel. screams.....screams......screams.. Karen falls to the ground. The girls rush to her aid, and find a butcher's knife sticking into her. They turn their heads toward the other opening of the tunnel and see Freddy standing there, with bloody hands, smiling, smirking. "Let's eat, I didn't like that bitch Karen anyway." Said Freddy. |
| "How could you?How could you have done this to her you bloody bitch?" screamed Julie with tears dropping out of her eyes. "How could I, you ask.Well, I just took a butcher's knife and with great pleasure threw it at her chest.Would you like to try it? said Freddy with an evill smile on her face. Without another word she ran off into the tunnel laughing out loud. "You guys go and get help for Karen, I'll go after Freddy," said Julie halfway running. When she gets into the tunnel, a butcher's knife came flying towards her and missed her ear just by a few inches. She tries to focus on where the knife came from and saw............. |
| A large table with numerous severed limbs hanging over the sides"What in the hell is going on here?" Freddy jumped out from behind some boxes as she grabbed Julie and tied her to the chair. "Now we'll feast on you bitch"Julie screamed as a strange man approached them. "Has our plan been set in motion?"Freddy nodded as the strange man smiled"Good now all I've got to do is wait for my idiot brother to come help you and I'll have what I've been wanting all alone". Julie tried to break free but to no avail as the man stared at her"Allow me to introduce myself I am Erik Fedsill and the chef you think is behind these slayings is actually my feeble excuse for a brother". "You mean he's really not a murderer"Erik shook his head as he sighed"No unfortunately he's the weaker half you see he actually likes helping people and they said I was a phsycho". Julie shook her head as she replied"Boy imagine that"Freddy struck her in the face as she spoke"You should learn to show more respect". "Go to hell bitch and take that physchotic bastard with you!"Freddy drew back her fist as Erik stopped her"All in do time my dear but first we have other important things to take care of remember?" |
| Julie could feel the blood from Freddy's punch trickle from her nostrils and corner of her mouth. She kept struggling to get free, but it was useless, that bitch Freddy tied her up good and tight, almost too tight. It was hard for Julie to breathe. Freddy and Erik left, to do God knows what, when Julie heard a noise behind her. " Ssshhh, my child. I'll untie you." Said the voice. It just so happened to be reconizable. It was Erik's brother Chef Joe. "Hold on Julie dear, Freddy tied knots I can't undo, I'll have to use a knife." He reached over and grabbed a hold of the bloody steak knife lying on the table. Sawed the ropes and let Julie out. Her wrists hurt from the rope burns she got from being tied up. |
| She looked back at Chef Joe and said "we need to warn the others". They ran to the cabin as fast as they could, but no one was there. Then they ran to the kitchen, and found them there. |
| Lying on the countertop, was Susan's lifeless body. She had been gutted. Her entrails were hanging out, slices all through the colon once inside her. Her heart was missing, if she even ever had one. Her blood pooled on the floor beneath her. Janie was still alive, but hanging upside down by the butcher block. Her hands were duct taped as well as her mouth. Blood was gushing from a wound on her scalp. |
| Julie ran over to help Janie as Joe sighed deeply"These girls deserved better my brother is going to pay!" Julie helped Janie down as she removed the duct tape from her hands and mouth"You've got a pretty nasty cut Janie but you'll make it". She managed to nodd he head as julie stared at Joe"This was your brother's doing wasn't it?" He lowered his head as he nodded"Yes this was Erik's handy work and so help me I'll get him for what he's done to your friends!" |
| "But where are we going to go now we must get away from them" Julie asked. "My car is still here" Joe said. They made their way out to the car only to NOT find it. |
| They didn't know what to do. " I know I parked my car here, I'm not crazy." Said Joe.Trying to keep himself and the girls calm, he said, "It's alright girls, I'll get us out of here. Let's head back to your cabins, where hopefully we can be safe." Walking back was extremely terrifying. No one could believe what had happened. Too afraid to talk, they reached the cabins, and locked the door behind them.Julie walked to her bed, and was startled to see a lump. Someone was lying in her bed !! Walking slowly, she saw the head of an unidentified woman, layed neatly on the pillow. The lump was not her body. Julie took off the covers, and was shocked at the sight of all the internal organs spread along her bed. Stifling a scream, she saw a neatly folded piece of paper. Reaching out with trembling fingers, she grabbed the note, and passed it on to Joe. |
Joe read it aloud, Daisy's are white Rose's are red Watch out tonight You'll be dead!!!! Everyone screamed at the eerie poem. Julie especailly, the note was in her bed. |
| Joe tried to calm them down as he noticed a shiny object laying underneath the table. He bent down and grabbed it as he stared at it with a sigh"What is it Joe?"one of the girls asked. He shook his head as he replied"It's my brother's pendant he must have lost it". Julie grabbed it from his hand as she turned it around and noticed a message written on the back of it. "Go to the lake and search the trees for I'll be waiting to kill thee"Julie dropped the pendant as she stared at her hand. Blood dripped off her palms as Julie realized that the message was written in blood...her friends blood. |
| "Wow, your brother is very skilled at what he does" Julie said. "Yeah, but thats not a good thig" Joe said. |
Unwilling to put the girls in any kind of immediate danger, Joe told them to stay in there cabins, and made them each promiseto stay in them with the doors locked at all times. He then realized that may not be the smartest decision. His brother was very deceptive, and keeping the girls alone, unprotected might have been his plans, While Joe searched in the woods , like a cat chasing its prey. Thinking it over for a few moments, Joe decided the girls should go with him. He had a plan, and he needed them..... |
| ..follow close behind him, in case he needed their help. "Alright girls, Jannie and Julie, holds hands. Remember Freddy is with my brother. I think they may want to trick us." Joe said. "I don't wanna die." Jannie said as tears fell from her eyes. Julie hugged her and said, "Don't worry, we'll get out of here. I know we will. Just follow Joe's instructions." They followed close behind Joe as he entered the trail to the lake. There was a boat there they could take. |
| When they reach the boat, they found that it had quite a big hole in it."Can we make it to the other side with hole in it?" asked Julie. "I'm not sure.I don't think we can make it across," said Joe. "What should we do" |
| Joe shook his head as he smiled"Follow me I've got an idea"the girls followed him through the woods to a clearing as he pointed towards the water. "We'll just use the raft I started building a few weeks back"Julie nodded as she replied. "It still needs a little work though"Joe nodded as he stared at them"Yeah but if we all work together it should be finished in no time". |
| They worked tediously on the raft for some hours until they both grew tired of work. "I really can't do anymore today, Julie...", Joe managed to choke out over his heavy breathing "...I'm too tired". "Oh come on.", Julie said, "We only have a tiny bit left and then it'll be done and over with. Are you really going to sit there and tell me that a GIRL can do more work than you?" "Fine, let's just do it", Joe said in an annoyed voice. They all got back to work, working extra hard to ensure the job would be completed swiftly. "Done!", Julie exclaimed. "It's about time", Joe said. Cheers from the rest of the group rang out in unison. "How will we know if it works?", Julie said. "There's only one way to find out", Joe retorted with a grin on his face. He slowly edged the raft into the deathly cold water. "Be careful Joe", Julie warned. "C'mon, this is child's play. I know what I'm doing", Joe exclaimed self-assuringly. He tied one end of the raft to the shore so it didn't float away. The only way he would know if it really worked was to test it out. He stepped on with one foot and pressed down to test the durability, keeping the other on the shore in case it didn't hold. "Seems ok to me", Joe said, "I guess I'll be the first to see how well it holds up when i'm all the way on it." He stepped on the other foot. The raft wobbled in the water and he struggled to gain his balance. After a few moments, he was steady and had a huge grin on his face. "I guess it wor...", before he could finish his sentence, tragedy struck...... |
An arm reached up out of the water holding a very large knife and sliced through Joe's neck. He fell into the water. both girls screamed as they turned to run, but someone was behind them. Erik stood there and smiled at the two girls. "Well, looks like we are going to have some tender vitals for this evenings dinner!" Erik said. |
| Julie lunged at Erik as he knocked her to the ground and smiled"I wouldn't do that if I were you little girl ha,ha,ha". He held the knife tightly in his right hand as he pulled Joe's body out of the water. "My brother always was the weaker one don't you think?"Julie and the others stared at him as he smiled. "Now follow me children or else!"Julie shook her head as Erik grabbed her arm and held the knife to her throat. "Do as I say bitch or I swear I'll make you wish you had!"he threw her to the ground as laughed loudly. |
| The girls didn't have much choice now, but to follow Erik. The three of them waited for Freddy to immerge from the lake. Freddy, walks out, weilding the knife she used on Joe, twirling it like a baton, as if she were a macrabe cheerleader. Walking toward the group, she tried to apologize to Erik for having to kill his brother. "Don't worry about it, he was so fucking weak. If you hadn't of did it, I would have." Erik said. The group returned to the kitchen, and Freddy tied the girls up to a broken wheelchair railing, and made them watch Erik cut up Susan's body and fry the batter dipped flesh for the campers supper. |
| Julie turned her head away as Erik smiled"Don't worry child Uncle Erik will take good care of you ha,ha,ha". Julie tried to break free as Freddy walked over and slapped her in the face"Stop doing that because you're really starting to make me mad bitch!" Erik laughed as he stared at the cut-up meat that once was the girl's friend Susan. He walked towards the girls as he smiled"Would you like a taste I'm sure your friend Susan won't mind ha,ha,ha". |
| Thank you all for writing this campfire with me. It was quite fun, and I love the way it turned out, maybe we will do a serial out of it. haha. THANKS AGAIN, LOVE YA ALL. Tina |
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