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 After fifty years in the prison ministry there probably isn't much I haven't heard. This is not a debate forum. We will agree to disagree if it ever comes to that. It is meant for discussions concerning the Poietes Group. Bible talks are welcome. I will be posting Bible questions, polls, O.T. items, comments, and anything suitable for everyone. You may do the same. . THE BIBLE IS THE ONLY BOOK THAT READS YOU
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| We are therefore Christ’s ambassadors, as though God were making his appeal through us. We implore you on Christ’s behalf: be reconciled to God. 2 Corinthians 5:20 NASB Did you know that you have a high-ranking and influential job in the Kingdom of God? Quihadi  |
"And do not grieve the Holy Spirit of God, by whom you were sealed for the day of redemption." Ephesians 4:30 (NASB) when we act like the world talk like the world believe like the world respond like the world the Spirit of God feels shock feels hurt feels grief He longs for us He thinks about us He desires to be close to us He wants to reveal Himself to us He lives within and will always be within I will not drag Him down a mire of sin For He would go with me again Quihadi |
Would you like to receive guidance from the Holy Spirit today? "That the God of our Lord Jesus Christ, the Father of glory, may give unto you the spirit of wisdom and revelation in the knowledge of Him." Ephesians 1:17 KJV like pulling the curtains out of the way so I can see what has always been there outside the window at the right time He removes the veil obstructing my view instantly my mind sees and understands Quihadi |
Nay, in all these things we are more than conquerors through him that loved us. (KJV) "More than conquerors" Ancient Greek - hupernikos huper means more than and nikos means conquerors we are greater conquerors superior conquerors higher and better conquerors utmost conquerors top-notch conquerors paramount conquerors unsurpassed conquerors unequaled conquerors unrivaled conquerors we are more than a match for any foe Quihadi |
| Disclaimer:Please only use what is useful, and send the rest into cyberspace. Where I read your poem. Is it a good title? Does it add something more to the poem? Be wary of titles that are just labels (e.g. Sky or Daffodils) if there is the potential for something stronger. Using Poem or Sonnet etc as your title is a wasted opportunity. Does the first line work? Does it pull the reader into the poem, make the poem inviting or engaging right from the start? Or is it a bit weak or explanatory? Does the poem use strong language and imagery? Does it use strong, specific nouns and verbs, or does it over-rely on adjectives and adverbs? Does it create word pictures or ideas as you read it? Do you feel fully engaged throughout the poem, or are there places where your attention drops? Are there wordy or slow parts that could be tightened? Does the poet use metaphors and similes in original ways? Are they fitting to the poem’s subject or are they too ‘odd’? (i.e. the poet has tried too hard) Do the line breaks work? Has the poet broken lines effectively for rhythm, sound and meaning? Often line breaks can work like punctuation – is that happening effectively? If there are lines carried over (enjambed) does this work? Has the poet used stanza breaks? Do they work? Would the poem benefit from more or less stanza breaks? Has the poet used white space effectively? Do you feel there is room for you as the reader to enter the poem? Does the poem end strongly? What is the last line doing? Does it introduce something odd or irrelevant at the end? Does it leave you with something to think about? Do you understand (more or less) what the poet is trying to tell you? Or is the poem too obscure or impenetrable? Does the poem excite or at least satisfy you? Thank you for entering the contest and allowing me to review your work. Quihadi |
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