Thank you, Anni. Maybe I'm a masochist because I do like making things difficult for myself. I considered rhyming each line as well, but that was a bridge too far. Perhaps next time...
Today he woke up sick,
his voice has gone all thick,
his nose it is a-dripping,
and his grip is somewhat slipping.
So it’s not the best of times
to start demanding lines
all positive and wise
when his temp is on the rise.
Signed: Beholden’s Mom
Line count: 8 (I don’t count my mom’s signature)
Form: Rhymed aabb
For Express It In Eight, 01.12.24
Prompt: Living mindfully - break patterns, do more listening and observing.
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