Ohh, beautiful. Your judgement of months, personal & seasonal - six of them. A lulling rhythm, some sadness, stoicism & sensory detail - I love this poem.
As Carolyn noted: Ouch. Very depressive. Unfortunately, this encapsulates large stretches of my existence. Strong message if it evokes such a strong response.
Ouch. This is relentless in its listing of what isn’t there & conveys such a sense of powerlessness. “The violence to endure” stuck with me in particular.
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