Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
I admire you for your honesty and attitude on this subject. It's so true how the victims/survivors have been treated as the one's who have done the wrong and blamed unjustly.
Very few have had compassion towards the woman.
I was 19 , when it was over given the gun that was held on me. The police wanted to charge me for having it. They treated me like dirt and I left before the rape kit came. I went back to work and didn't talk about for decades except to my best friend.
Thanks for understanding...
'I was sitting on a branch.....
Waiting....
'I felt a tap on my shoulder....
'And there she was.....
beautiful.....
warm and glowing.....
waiting to embrace me.....
'She dried my tears...
in exchange of a story....
'Heard my words with love and patience....
'we held each other tight and cried....
'She offered me her lap so I could rest all my worries...
'Promised me a world full of Wonder and Glories....
'I could feel her warmth slowly turning my body into ashes...
'Opening the cage of pain for my trapped soul..
and then I felt each atom that was me...
Glow and Rise to the skies...
One with the Universe at last...
'Free... so Free...
Finally...'
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