Very well said, Sue. I agree with life is satisfying once we stop focusing on other's happiness and instead of focusing on ourselves. It was a difficult lesson but one that changed my life.
Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
In this world, all say,
I love you!
So, I will share all of mine with you.
But, for you, I see…
You share your moments with me,
All your gains and losses.
You share your preferences with me,
All your choices and not.
You share your emotions with me,
All your joys and pains.
But still, you don't love me,
But, I don't regret it,
Nights and days we stayed together,
You taught me a lot,
I loved you, still, I do so, and forever.
Just want to be your friend for a lifetime,
The freedom you gifted me, I cherish,
Yet, it hurt me as sharp as a knife,
But, I love everything of yours,
And your presents, may it be a rose or a knife.
Pains I felt, but now they are memories,
My love tried to be yours but never died.
Solitary as a bird it will stay,
But, never, it will decay. ♥
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