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Rated: 13+ · Book · Fantasy · #1609595
Every thought you have leaves a trace, an echo of yourself.
It takes place in a Victorian England setting, only with weird technologies like robots. The story is constantly evolving, and everything is subject to change. and now Jack Sheppard is going to be the one to attempt to reunite them to fight the New Order.



Jack Sheppard was an experiment. Upon the initial discovery of brain waves, the Directorate wanted to harness their power. So Jack was selected, and he can now pick up on brain echoes. He cannot read minds, it is not that advanced. Nor can he communicate with people through his mind. He can, however, see people's true feelings, he can tell when they're lying, and he can see someone's plan unfold in their mind before they even get a chance to voice it.



When the Directorate kills his fiance, Jack becomes rebellious, and quits the Directorate. But nobody quits the Directorate, so now he must team up with several groups of outlaws to fight back.



This is my general idea as of 10/20. It changes all the time (or more specifically, gets more complicated). Ideas, critiques, always welcome. :)
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