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Printed from https://writing.com/main/books/entry_id/929469-Chopsticks-Theme-and-Variations
by Rhyssa Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ · Book · Contest Entry · #2081410
my entries for the Construct Cup
#929469 added February 25, 2018 at 8:17pm
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Chopsticks: Theme and Variations
my daddy taught us rhythm
at the keyboard—
just two fingers, he said.
one on each hand,
and count
:

one, two, three, four, five, change.
one two three, four five change,
one two three, four five change,
one-hold, two three

repeat,

then the chorus:
one hold-two, three hold-four, five hold-six,
one two three four hold-five
one two three four hold-five,
and done.

in the bass, he rounded out
the melody—ohm, pah, pah,
ohm, pah, pah,
and suddenly, we played music.
not just chopsticks.

we laughed, sitting on the bench
that my mama covered in
patchwork—lavender and blue
to protect it from scratches
and mud and grass stains
and the occasional dog slobber.

when we knew it, he taught us
the bass, and we’d play
ohm, pah, pah,
while he played chopsticks
like we hadn’t heard it before—

one-y, two-y, three-y, four, five, six—

and we stopped playing to see
what he was doing, but he said,
just play, and we did,
and suddenly, we were playing
something new.
and then he changed again.
we knew better to stop this time,
as he played chopsticks

one, two, three, four, down, six.

and then we switched, so that we could learn.
my sister learned best.

she plays chopsticks two handed,
her left hand on the bass,
while her right hand to play the melody.
and her children look on and ask,
show me how, and they play chopsticks,
two fingered and laughing,
theme and variations.

line count: 50

Prompt

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