Mus'ing

commercials

  I know I'm a little on the far side with opinions, but the other day I had a review on a piece of my work that said, "She





felt the computer had left something out in a transfer of the story. I knew exactly what she was talking about. HE SAID





, SHE SAID. You know what I'm talking about. To me, it feels like too much clutters up the landscape. Like commercials





in the middle of a movie. Maybe because with speed reading, I never read them anyway. Enyhew, it's just my opinion. If





at some point, reading one of my stories, you become befuddled, and it would help if, WHO SAID WHAT was there, let





me know. I'll se if I can change the poetic discrepancy if it fits the case.-charlie55