Poems I've placed into statics, now transfered here with record of stats and reviews |
[Lost in a loneliness without a canteen Visual experimentation] Water springs Swells of remembered happy wells Sun Hot Dried Blistered Once a wet full cistern Longing cuts deep And Still Forgotten springs of snow melt Desert mirage Smiling moisture Gone as suddenly when reached for. 30 March How to read.... Water springs Swells of remembered happy wells Blistered Once a wet full cistern Longing cuts deep Forgotten springs of snow melt Smiling moisture as suddenly when reached for. Sun Still Hot Desert mirage Gone Dried And Water springs Swells of remembered happy wells Sun Hot Dried Blistered Once a wet full cistern Longing cuts deep And Still Forgotten springs of snow melt Desert mirage Smiling moisture Gone as suddenly when reached for. © Copyright 2001 DyrHearte (UN: dyrhearte at Writing.Com). All rights reserved. DyrHearte has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work. Statistic Description Statistic Value Total Views For This Item: 129 Statistic Description # Of Ratings % Of Ratings 5 Stars 1 100% Total Ratings: 1 100.0% review: 1 Review By: Lou-Here By His Grace Date and Time: 09-21-05 @ 2:28pm Public/Private: Private Reviewer's Rating: 5.0 Review Length: 91 Characters | 91 w/o WritingML Well written. I like the style alot! No suggestions for improvement. Write ON!!!! |