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The main characters are introduced, also hard science, political and religious intrigue.
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EPISODE 6 - DISCOVERY
FADE IN:

INT. AMERICAN SCIENCE SECTION

Mike steps off the elevator.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Vesna, remind me to keep on these
                             guys about sleep. I have a
                             feeling that all of them will try
                             to stay up for the next 30 days.

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             I can pipe some really boring
                             Muzak into the labs, if need be.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             It may come to that!

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                                       (knocking on the
                                       hydrologist's door)
                             Pavel, Peter. Any hidden lakes?

                                                 NORODSKY
                             Nyet. Not even any decent voids
                             that could be caves. Maybe we'll
                             find something closer to the poles.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             We'll see. We still have 29 days
                             to go here.

He moves on to the geologist's lab where Doctors Jameson and
Garan are busily categorizing soil and rock samples. Yuri
is taking advantage of the scanning electron microscope that
the American had brought.

As he passes the archaeology lab, Joe Belisar and Doctor
Barishnikov are in a discussion over the best brands of Vodka.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             My friend, we thank you for the
                             month's vacation and the
                             adventure, but we still don't
                             know of what use we will be.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Grinning)
                             Oh, there may still be some
                             surprises in store that require
                             your expertise. If we run across
                             any little green men, you'll be
                             invaluable.

Both archaeologists look as if they want to throw something
at Mike, so he moves on and puts out a call to the remaining
explorers.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. COMMAND DECK

As he returns to the command deck, Mike can see from the
outside monitors that everyone is reluctantly turning back
to the ship.

One by one, the crewmembers drag themselves up to the
command area, except Doctors Kitch and Medvedev who are
still busy preparing growth plates.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             I'm glad you all are beginning to
                             get your Mars legs. We're going
                             to be heading out to our second
                             site in a couple of minutes, so
                             I'm glad you're all back.

                                                 JAMESON
                             I need to get some samples from
                             the Caldera at Olympus Mons.

                                                 NORODSKY
                             And I need to stop on the poles
                             for samples and testing.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             Before the scientists get out of
                             hand, where, exactly, are we
                             going next?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Cydonia.

There is an immediate uproar in the cabin as everyone starts
in at once.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             You're not one of those crazy UFO
                             people that believe that mountain
                             is a face, are you?

Mike laughs and almost doubles over while the others just
look at him strangely.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Good grief, no! I think the
                             Global Explorer put that
                             speculation to rest back in
                             ninety-eight. But during her
                             testing, Vesna did find some
                             things that piqued my interest.

A series of images appear on a large monitor in front of the
group showing pictures of the mountain with various
resolutions, ranging from one that looked as if it were a
face, to one that showed almost every crag and boulder of a
very weathered mountain. Measured on the diagonal, the
feature is almost a mile across.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             As scientists, I want you to take
                             a hard look at these pictures and
                             tell me what you see, especially
                             you, Yuri and Peter. There's
                             something wrong with this picture.

All of the scientists start studying the images. Doctor
Garan gets up for a closer look.

                                                 GARAN
                             What I see here is a very old and
                             weathered mountain.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Keep looking.

                                                 JOHN BELISAR
                                       (Jumping up)
                             Hold it right there.

All heads turned to the boy.

                                                 JOHN BELISAR (CONT'D)
                             I remember something from high
                             school that nature doesn't make
                             right angles!

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Almost shouting)
                             Bingo! Look closely, two sides
                             of the base are exactly parallel,
                             and another is perpendicular to
                             them both.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             But the fourth is rounded.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             If the wind comes predominantly
                             from one direction, with all of
                             this sand and dust, what would
                             the eventual dune look like?

Garan turns back to the monitor, this time pulling a small
magnifier from his pocket.

                                                 GARAN
                             My God, I think the boy is right!
                             I must see this!

Barishnikov gets up at this point and snatches his
compatriot's glass.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             You may be correct. What would
                             this mean?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Perhaps the crazy people were
                             right. This thing didn't happen,
                             it was built.

Silence falls on the room like a sledgehammer.

Nobody even looks at anyone else, but remain glued to the
pictures in front of them. There is nothing to say, just
total astonishment at this new possibility.

Finally,

                                                 SVETLANA
                             Is this still being transmitted?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Like I said, 24/7. It's up to
                             your producers and whoever else
                             is picking it up to decide what
                             to run.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             Then I must talk to my people
                             immediately.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             No problem. The telephones are
                             in the lounge downstairs.
                             Speaking of which,
                                       (turning to the group
                                       of teenagers)
                             John, have you spoken with your
                             mother yet?

The boy reddens and looks at his shoes.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             Oksana, I promised your mother
                             that you would stay in touch. I
                             think you need to tell her that
                             you're doing all right.

The girl's eyes brighten.

                                                 OKSANA
                             I had forgotten in all of the
                             excitement.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             We have about an hour and a half
                             before we touch down again, so
                             you can all check in with
                             colleagues or relatives. Don't
                             worry, those lines are secure,
                             they are not part of the
                             broadcast. I'd just prefer if
                             you don't check in with the FBI
                             or FSB.

There is a momentary silence before they realize that was a
joke and laugh.

Lana, Oksana, and John leave together in the elevator and
the others begin to mill about waiting for its return.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. LOUNGE AREA IN LIVING QUARTERS

                                                 OKSANA
                                       (Breathlessly, Holding telephone)
                             Mamma, have you seen?

                                                 OLGA (OS)
                             My daughter, you do not know how
                             proud your father and I are. We
                             always have been, but today...if
                             we are killed tomorrow, we know
                             that we have done right!

                                                 OKSANA
                             Mamma, it is so exciting. I am
                             really here. I am cosmonaut! I
                             do not know what I can ever do
                             that would be better than this!

                                                 OLGA
                             You have not yet married to have
                             a child to make you as proud as
                             we. That is even better! Even
                             the President made a special
                             visit here on his way to the
                             Kremlin to congratulate me in
                             person. I felt so much a peasant
                             in this old dress. I cannot go
                             to the cafe without a crowd
                             gathering. In addition, do you
                             know this room at the hotel is
                             almost as large as our house? I
                             have never seen anything this
                             large for so few people! Your
                             father has telephoned me twice
                             since this morning. People are
                             coming out from the city to the
                             farm just to see where you grew
                             up. He said that even the head
                             of the University has called him.
                             He wanted you to know if you will
                             give a lecture when you return.
                             They are considering graduating
                             you this summer one year ahead of
                             time. They even think of giving
                             you a position there to tell of
                             your experience.

Oksana's eyes glaze over. This is more than a dream come
true, it was a dream she never dared have because it was
impossible.

                                                 OKSANA
                             Oh mamma, ya ochen liubliu tebya,
                             I love you so much.

Tears again appear at the edges of the girl's eyes.

                                                 OLGA
                             Ya znaiu, ya liubliu vas takzhe.
                             You have made us so proud; I feel
                             I will explode from it.

                                                 OKSANA
                             You and father have always made
                             me proud all of my life. I feel
                             that now I can give back to you a
                             small piece of what you have
                             given me.

This time it is her mother's turn to lose control. Oksana
can tell that sobs are close as her mother speaks.

                                                 OLGA
                             You just continue to be the best
                             that you know how. A mother
                             could never ask for a better
                             daughter.

There is a short time as mother and daughter, overcome with
emotion, sat at either end of a 47-million mile telephone
connection and cry.

                                                 OKSANA
                             Mamma, Mr. Angel has said that
                             you may call me anytime you wish.
                             I may forget again, so please,
                             you do not.

                                                 OLGA
                             Yes. That Mr. McKinney said we
                             could keep this telephone as long
                             as you are gone. I will have it
                             on my pillow in case you forget
                             what our time is.

                                                 OKSANA
                                       (Laughing)
                             I will keep an eye on the clocks;
                             but you do to!

                                                 OLGA
                             I will. You have much to do, and
                             much to study so I will not keep
                             you any longer.

                                                 OKSANA
                             I love you and father.

                                                 OLGA
                             And we love you so much, also.

Oksana hangs up the telephone and looks around the room.
She can tell that John's call was not going as well.
Actually, anyone within three feet of the boy could have
overheard his mother describing in detail the various
tortures she planns to visit on the youth with when he returnes.

John looks dejected as he replaces the receiver on the hook.
Oksana walks over to try to share some of her elation.

                                                 OKSANA
                             Do not worry. Your mother is
                             actually very proud you.

                                                 JOHN BELISAR
                             She sure didn't show it!

                                                 OKSANA
                             Of course not! You're a boy.

She smiles as they enter the elevator together.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. LOUNGE AREA IN LIVING QUARTERS

Svetlana is on the telephone with her producers.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             What should I do? What direction
                             does this have do go?

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                             I do not know. This man is not
                             predictable! I do not even know
                             the question to ask. We had
                             everything prepared when this
                             appeared a true scientific
                             expedition, but now?

                                                 SVETLANA
                             Ya znaiu. But there is more here
                             than is on the surface. He only
                             tells us things at the last
                             minute when we need to know them.
                             He must know something more than
                             he has revealed.

                                                 SVETLANA (CONT'D)
                             So far, he has not done anything
                             that would indicate that he is
                             crazy like those UFO people. If
                             he is to do this, there must be a
                             reason that we do not know as yet.

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                             Possible, but I still worry.
                             This does not fit into what we
                             have thought you would be doing.
                             We have no questions or scripts
                             prepared. Our people are going
                             crazy now trying to come up with
                             your next interview. We have ten
                             different scripts!

                                                 SVETLANA
                             I think you will have to accept
                             that neither of us can control
                             where this will go. I must ad
                             lib. We will all have to ride
                             the pony and hope it does not
                             throw us off. I have had some
                             success so far at being able to
                             stay on top of this.

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                             I hope so. If this changes much
                             more, you will be entirely on
                             your own.

                                                 SVETLANA
                                       (Smirking)
                             Aren't I always? I have never
                             let you down before, and I do not
                             intend to now. We will be ahead
                             of the story as we always are, I
                             guarantee it.

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                             You had better. Our people do
                             not like surprises, and this man
                             appears to be full of them.
                             There is no way we can program
                             around this without knowing what
                             he will do next.

                                                 SVETLANA
                                       (Deviously)
                             You haven't studied him for a
                             year like I have. He is actually
                             quite predictable - he will do as
                             he pleases, period. The problem
                             is to know what that is and
                             prepare for it. I do not see the
                             problem. Besides, he likes my legs.

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                                       (Smirking)
                             So I heard.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             I will keep working on this, and
                             try to let you know what will
                             happen next. We should be back
                             on sometime in the next hour or
                             so, so keep all of your people on
                             duty.

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                             Oh, they're not going anywhere.
                             They all want to stay and watch
                             the uncut transmission. Half of
                             the people here are actually off-
                             duty. They are just confused as
                             to how to prepare you.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             Then let me prepare myself as I
                             go along, I think that will be
                             best for us all. That is what my
                             rival does; she just ad-libs her
                             questions with almost no
                             direction. That must be an
                             American thing. She does not
                             even appear to want to control
                             the interview or the situation,
                             but lets it happen as it does.
                             This afternoon, her people
                             interviewed her as if she were
                             controlling this mission. I do
                             not understand this, but you may
                             want to study their ways. After
                             all, more people watch her
                             network than ours. It may be a
                             good lesson.

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                             You may be correct. Prepare
                             yourself, in case our owners
                             agree with you.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             I already have. Do svidanya,
                             Grigory Mikhailovich.

                                                 RUSSIAN NEWS DIRECTOR (OS)
                             Do svidanya, Svetlana Illianovna.

Svetlana replaces the telephone in its cradle and mumbles to
herself.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             This is definitely going to be
                             interesting. Besides, he is not
                             unattractive.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. COMMAND DECK

Everyone is again in the control room with their eyes on the
monitors. They are about a mile above the mountain and the
resolution of the image is almost photographic. Indeed, it
s obvious that this was not a "face", but a badly weathered
mountain of stone. As they approach closer, Doctor Garan
moves to the screen and again pulls out his magnifier.

                                                 GARAN
                             Stop it there, please. Can you
                             hold this picture for a moment?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             Yes. Would you like anything
                             magnified?

                                                 GARAN
                             Please, this lower right quarter,
                             if you would.

They can see the section the doctor is referring to suddenly
fill the screen revealing a jumble of boulders and debris.

Young John moves closer also.

                                                 JOHN BELISAR
                                       (Excited)
                             Those aren't just rocks. They're
                             blocks!

The others crowd around as the scene reveals a regular
pattern of blocks that, although badly weathered, are most
distinctly rectangular.

                                                 SHARON MANSON
                                       (Breathlessly)
                             Are they getting this on Earth?

                                                 VESNA
                             Yes. I have been splitting the
                             screen with the outside pictures
                             as well as sending what you do in
                             here.

The archaeologists crowd closer, obviously anxious to study
this.

Barishnikov turns to Yuri.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             Is the boy correct? Nature does
                             not produce perfect squares?

                                                 GARAN
                             Not that I've ever seen, unless
                             those are giant salt crystals.

Mike is been standing to one side all this time, smiling at
the group in the manner of a cat who has just swallowed a
canary.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             I told you I wasn't crazy.
                                       (grinning at
                                       Barishnikov, savoring
                                       every moment)
                             But I have saved the best for last.

Lana's face shows her realization that she had just lost any
semblance of control. It is a mixture of anger and wonder.

The scene on the monitor starts changing as Vesna descends
and moves around to the "eastern" face. The picture is
similar to what they had seen before except for the steeply
sloping sides. In various places, the group can see evidence
of seams where the blocks had fit together. Sand and time
has widened them enough that they are relatively easy to spot.

Jameson is just staring at the screen almost drooling

                                                 JAMESON
                             That has to be at least 10,000
                             years old!

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             I'm not a geologist, but unless I
                             miss my guess, I'd say closer to
                             a half-million.

The group just stares at him.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             What makes you say that?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             For one thing, that would be
                             about the time the atmosphere
                             disappeared around here. For the
                             other, I'm sure that Joseph or
                             Igor could tell you what other
                             major event happened at that time
                             closer to home.

The two archaeologists look at each other puzzled for a
moment, and then the light begins to dawn.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                                       (Stunned)
                             You don't mean to suggest...

Mike smiles and completes the doctor's sentence,

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             That was about the time when
                             genus Homo got up off his
                             knuckles and took over the Earth.

You could have heard a grain of sand drop on the carpet.
There is absolute silence, as all look dumbfounded at each
other. So much has happened this day that each is in mental
overload.

The look on Lana's face shows she knows beyond any doubt
that she has absolutely no control over the story or the
storyteller.

Sharon finally breaks the silence.

                                                 SHARON MANSON
                             You knew about this all along,
                             didn't you?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Yes. Would any of you have
                             agreed to come if I had made such
                             an insane claim on Earth?

The scientists slowly shake their heads no. The young
people, however, all vigorously nod assent.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             When I was testing the prototype
                             of this ship, I sent her on a
                             scouting mission here and we
                             discovered this. I'd suspected
                             it before, because of the shape.
                             I knew I had to come here and
                             bring a crew that knew what they
                             were doing and could make the
                             most of the knowledge. But like
                             I said, the best is yet to come.

Sharon sits down hard in a chair.

The rest only stare at him in disbelief.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. CONFERENCE ROOM

                                                 BILL MURRAUGH
                             I warned you that this man was a
                             loose cannon. We have to clamp a
                             news blackout on this before he
                             does any more damage. This type
                             of information has to stay with
                             my agency, or within the military;
                             project Bluebook, or whatever we
                             call it this week. This idiot up
                             there is giving out intel that
                             would be classified in a
                             heartbeat to any terrorist with a
                             television! At very least, this
                             Mike Angel is going to create
                             mass panic!

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                                       (Quietly)
                             And just how would you propose we
                             do that? I think it's rather
                             obvious that there was an agenda
                             your 'intelligence' analysts
                             didn't see coming." He stared
                             directly at Murraugh. "I would
                             say that, obviously, the cat is
                             already out of the bag. Would
                             you cut the Internet backbone
                             entering the country? How about
                             jamming all the television
                             stations?

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST (CONT'D)
                             Even if it were possible, someone
                             would have us in court in 10
                             minutes on a freedom of
                             information issue and they'd be
                             right. What we have to
                             concentrate on now is damage control.

The CIA Chief sits down and stares at his hands.

                                                 GENERAL APPLEHOFF
                                       (Protesting)
                             But every left wing organization
                             is going to sue again for the
                             uncensored notes of Bluebook we
                             didn't let out in the nineties.
                             I don't know how we can claim
                             that it's classified after this!

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                             That's why I want suggestions,
                             not problems, doggone it. I need
                             you to get your staffs together
                             and come up with realistic
                             suggestions of how to handle this
                             situation. This is not just an
                             intelligence disaster; it's a
                             public relations nightmare. I'm
                             going to start getting calls any
                             minute from everyone from the
                             Ecumenical Council and the
                             Fundamentalists saying that we're
                             trying to destroy religion, to
                             the flying saucer cultists saying
                             we've hidden this for years.
                             Remember this is an election year.
                             If I'm not here next year, none
                             of you will be either.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. KREMLIN OFFICE

President Puchinskiy leans back in his chair with a smile
and takes a small sip of vodka knowing that his counterpart
in Washington was probably having a hemorrhage at this moment.

                                                 PRESIDENT PUCHINSKIY
                                       (To himself)
                             The man must always control
                             everything. While I enjoy
                             getting it for free. Moreover,
                             my people are right there!

He closes his eyes savoring the thought and sinks back
farther in his chair as he takes another sip.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. COMMAND DECK

All eyes are still on Mike, except for John who is still
studying the screen.

                                                 JOHN BELISAR
                                       (Shouting)
                             Stop right there! Look!
                             Everybody look.

The scientists move across the room to the screen. At first,
the scene appears like the rest, just a jumble of stones.
Then they begin to discern a square that was not like the
rest of the area. It is a patch of shadow like a block was
missing about a third of the way up the face of the monolith.

                                                 JAMESON
                             That must have been a loose block.
                             It can't be an opening.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Vesna, turn on the ground
                             penetrating radar so that they
                             can get a better view.

Another screen paints with a scene showing a square in three
dimensions. They can clearly make out the surface features
that they could see on the other screen, but within the
square is a grayer pattern. Clearly, the radio waves are
not reflecting from anything solid in that area.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Cheshire grin)
                             It may be filled with sand, but
                             I'd definitely say that's an
                             extremely deep hole. There's no
                             echo from anything solid for at
                             least 100 meters. Looks like an
                             opening to me.

The group glues themselves to both screens. Mike can see
the two anthropologists fairly quivering now with excitement,
but no one says a word. Everyone is fascinated with the
pictures, but afraid to say anything for fear the spell
would be broken.

Sharon is still sitting, but watching as if she is in a
trance. Lana is moving about, first to one screen then the
other. She is in a total fog.

She can't come up with a single question; she could come up
with a thousand.

Mike lets this play out for several minutes.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             We'll put down at the base under
                             the anomaly for the night.

Protests come from every member there. Despite the fact it
is after midnight in Moscow, everyone is ready to run out to
investigate what he or she had seen on the video screens
with their own eyes.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             We are going to have plenty of
                             time. Not only has this been a
                             long day for everyone, but also
                             it will be night soon and the
                             temperatures are going to drop
                             dramatically. It may have been
                             in the 60's this afternoon, but
                             it will probably drop close to
                             minus that after dark. In the
                             morning, I'll have Vesna pull as
                             much sand out of that opening as
                             she can without damaging anything.
                             If we're lucky, the whole thing
                             didn't fill up and excavating the
                             rest will be easier. Now good
                             night everyone.

There are still protests and grumbles of disappointment, but
most of them understand the wisdom of getting a fresh start.

Mike starts toward the elevator when Lana glares at him and
says almost sarcastically,

                                                 SVETLANA
                             Any more hidden agendas?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Still grinning like a
                                       Cheshire cat)
                             Nope. But there may be a few more
                             surprises.

He presses a button for the second deck.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. COMMAND DECK

The sun is just beginning to rise over the horizon when Mike
reenters the control room. Oksana is already there in front
of a monitor that continues to show page after page of
schematic diagrams of Vesna's computer and electrical wiring.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             I hope you got some sleep last
                             night. I think today will be a
                             very busy day.

                                                 OKSANA
                             Yes, but I could not sleep well.
                             I am used to studying at all
                             hours and this is too fascinating.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Have you gone over the engine
                             specifications yet?

                                                 OKSANA
                             Oh yes, I looked at that
                             yesterday. It is really so simple!

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Precisely. It really is just
                             things that everybody overlooked
                             for 50 years; a combination of
                             other people's ideas that nobody
                             ever put together before. It
                             took the house computer and me to
                             see where the pieces all fit
                             together to work like this. By
                             the way, you didn't tell me that
                             you have perfect grades at
                             University. I'm usually a fairly
                             good judge of people and I had a
                             hunch you were good; you seem to
                             have turned out better than I hoped.

The girl blushes and looks at the floor,

                                                 OKSANA
                             I have to try hard for my parents.
                             They have sacrificed so much for
                             me to be there, I must do well.

She looks up at Mike with a very serious face.

                                                 OKSANA
                             Why did you select me from all of
                             those people? I mean, this is
                             such an honor to be here, but
                             there had to be 10,000 people in
                             the crowd and I am just a young girl.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             You must know that I had to
                             choose someone to balance John's
                             sudden appearance.
                                       (The girl nods)
                             When I was there with your
                             president I could pick your eyes
                             out of the entire crowd; I could
                             feel your excitement was the same
                             as mine, all of the way up on the
                             podium.

Her blush deepens even more.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             You and your mother were in the
                             front row and holding your
                             bedding which told me you had
                             been there all night and that
                             also told me of your excitement.
                             You turning out to be an engineer
                             was an unexpected bonus. Now I
                             discover you are an honor student
                             as well. I was very fortunate.

                                                 OKSANA
                             No, it is I who is lucky! I
                             still do not believe I am here.
                             This is such a dream!

Mike just keeps smiling, very pleased with his choice as he
changes the subject.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             What do you see is our most
                             vulnerable system?

She stops and thinks for a minute.

                                                 OKSANA
                             If the computer stops, you have
                             Misha and Carol who can fly Vesna.
                             I would hate to see anything
                             happen to her, but that is not
                             too critical.

                                                 OKSANA (CONT'D)
                             If you run out of electricity,
                             you have a diesel generator that
                             can turn the engines long enough
                             to get home. But if we leak
                             helium, nothing will work.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Clapping his hands)
                             Brilliant! Everything in the
                             ship depends on being super-
                             cooled. What would you do if you
                             knew the helium was leaking?

She thinks again.

                                                 OKSANA
                             I would get into deep space as
                             quickly as possible. It would be
                             cold enough there to at least
                             allow the engines to work enough
                             to get to Earth orbit, although
                             the friction would increase
                             without a super fluid suspension.
                             From there somebody could get us
                             more helium so we could land.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Very pleased look)
                             Very good. That was exactly our
                             conclusions. Unfortunately,
                             helium will slowly leak through
                             the metal pores making a journey
                             longer than a few years very
                             troublesome. Vesna, the house,
                             and I are all working now on that
                             problem. Nevertheless, that was
                             outstanding deductive work. Keep
                             it up."

He sees a quick shadow pass on her face.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             Don't worry, we have no leaks. I
                             calculate the helium would last
                             close to three years before
                             leaking out through the containers.

John walks into the control room at this point, still
looking sleepy.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             And you, you I may have to
                             promote from gopher to scout.
                             You have the best eyes in the
                             group. You managed to pick out
                             the anomalies before any of our
                             scientific friends.

A broad grin breaks out on John's face

                                                 JOHN BELISAR
                             I just hope I can earn my keep here.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Oh, there'll be plenty of time
                             and work for that!

One by one, the others trail in displaying various stages of
sleepiness and excitement. Though they hadn't realized it,
yesterday had taken its toll. All check the monitors to
make sure what they had seen hadn't been a delusion.

                                                 GARAN
                             Why does that look different?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Vesna has pulled the sand from
                             the tunnel until she came across
                             a solid object. She doesn't
                             require as much sleep as we do so
                             she worked through the night. If
                             that were caused by a dislodged
                             block, the stone was over one
                             hundred meters long!

                                                 BELISAR
                             Are you saying there's a tunnel
                             behind that?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             That's what it looks like through
                             the sensors. It slopes downward
                             slightly for about a hundred
                             meters and then stops at
                             something solid. Today we can
                             see what that is.

The adrenaline rush has everyone awake now, excitement rises
even higher at that prospect. Even Oksana swivels away from
her diagrams, her eyes like saucers. Carol is shaking with
excitement, as is Barishnikov.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             Has everyone had breakfast?

Only John raises his hand. Oksana looks rather sheepish,
not admitting she had been up and studying the ship for
several hours and had forgotten to eat.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             OK. John, you help me get the
                             tools that we'll need ready,
                             while all of you others go
                             downstairs and get something to
                             eat. It's going to be a long day
                             and you'll need all the energy
                             you can muster. Ladies, I'd
                             recommend checking in with your
                             stations to prepare them for what
                             we're going to do. Vesna, please
                             FAX both presidents with our
                             findings to date so that they
                             stay in the loop.

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                                       (sarcastically)
                             Aye, aye.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             John, you're with me.

They both leave on the elevator.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. ENGINEERING SECTION

The two descend to the third level, a combination storage
area and engineering space. This is also the level where
Vesna "lived". John can see that the outside walls are
featureless except for three large evenly spaced vertical
rectangular sections. These contain the powerful electro-
magnets that "drove" the super conducting cylinders
contained within the walls in their liquid helium bath. The
main drive was designed after an old-fashioned shaded pole
motor and the drive coils extended into the room.

They retrieve shovels and miscellaneous digging gear from
the large wooden crates against the bulkheads. Mike also
picks up two of the "weapons" he had used against the sniper
in Roswell.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. RUSSIAN SCIENCE SECTION

They proceed with their tools to the lower laboratory level,
even though there are air locks on both laboratory sections
as well as on the engineering level.

The exploration suits had been stored down here for easy
access since it was "down".

The scientists straggle down after a heartier breakfast than
they anticipated wanting. Each had realized that they were
ravenous as well as tired from the excitement.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Have you ladies checked the local
                             weather in your labs yet? I
                             don't want to get caught outside
                             in a sandstorm.

                                                 SHARON MANSON
                                       (nodding)
                             I looked before I came up to the
                             control room. The closest storm
                             I could see is at least a
                             thousand kilometers off and is
                             not headed our direction. But,
                             until I get used to the pressure
                             systems here, that's the closest
                             I can predict any patterns.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Fair enough. I guess the next
                             thing to do is for you each to
                             collect whatever you think you'll
                             need outside and get suited up.

                                                                                          DISSOLVE TO:

INT. RUSSIAN SCIENCE SECTION

A half hour later, everyone is ready and they all crowd into
the air lock. When Mike opens the outer hatch, they are
surprised to see that it opens outward directly in front of
the opening on the artifact. Vesna has risen to that level
and is perched directly in front so that everyone can step
out directly to it without having to climb up a thousand
feet of rock and rubble.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

EXT. TUNNEL OPENING

The opening's sharp edges have been ground down, rounded,
and smoothed by eons of sandstorms. However, as the group
looks into the shaft, the lights from their helmets reveal
that it becomes perfectly square again about ten meters in.
There are distinct right angle joints top and bottom where
there had been some protection from continual weathering.
Mike was right, if this was a niche left by a dislodged
block of stone, it was one whale of a block.

As Vesna pulls back, the light from the rising sun
illuminates the shaft making it much easier to see into the
depths. The ship had used her gravity generators to clear
tons of debris overnight and the floor only holds a thin
covering of the ever-present red sand.

The tunnel is almost perfectly square, measuring at least
three meters by three meters. Mike waves to the journalists
to join him at point since they had the cameras on their
helmets. Each of the scientists carries at least one case
containing their instruments. John has the two shovels
along with one of the gravity "weapons". Mike has the other.

They start down the tunnel and Mike turns on a powerful
hand-held floodlight for better illumination. The helmet
lights are good, but become distracting as the party turns
their heads.

The shaft angles downward from the entrance at about a five
degree angle, not enough to be difficult, but enough to be
detectable that they are heading in a downward direction. A
little over a hundred meters down the shaft they come to a
pile of sand.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             This must be where Vesna detected
                             something solid and stopped so
                             not to disturb anything of
                             interest. John, if you'll give me
                             a hand clearing this. The rest
                             of you please line up against one
                             wall and we'll pile it towards
                             the other. Doctors Belisar and
                             Barishnikov, if you'll supervise
                             please. We want to move sand,
                             not destroy any artifacts. John
                             probably knows better than I
                             because I'm not a trained
                             archaeologist.

The two doctors move to the head of the line as Mike and
John begin shoveling sand and throwing it up the tunnel
along one side. The two journalists stand more to the
center to get a good view of the operation. Thirty minutes
of digging and they strike something solid - not just solid,
but from the sound and feel of the shovel blades, something
metallic.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             OK. Small shovels and brushes
                             from here on out. First, however,
                             if everyone would come forward
                             and against the wall.

He unslings the "weapon" as the group bunches up next to him.
All of a sudden, the sand begins moving up the tunnel toward
the entrance leaving a clean floor as if it had been vacuumed.

Doctor Barishnikov is on his knees moving the remaining sand
with his gloves and Joseph joins him. Mike steps back a
pace to allow Lana to get a complete view of what is
unfolding. Sharon is behind Doctor Belisar. As they move
sand from the base, it sags and slides from the roof.
Suddenly a reflection of their lights reveals itself near
the ceiling.

The two archaeologists working at the base of the mound miss
the glint, but are startled by the sharp intake of breath
over the communicators from each of the observers. Though
the density of the atmosphere of Mars is only one hundredth
that of Earth, enough sound was conducted that Mike can hear
just enough to indicate that the journalists are rapidly
trying to interpret what is happening to their audiences on
Earth.

Joseph and Igor stand and start frantically pulling sand
down from the top as John and Mike try to keep up with them
by shoveling debris from the base. In no time, the entire
artifact reveals itself as Mike again pushes the sand back
up the tunnel and out the entrance. As they step back,
there is complete silence over the airwaves.

Standing in front of them and before the television eyes of
the world, hidden for millennia behind a wall of sand, is a
great metallic door.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. CONFERENCE ROOM

This time, President Forest is not subdued; he is frantic
and loud.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                             How fast can we get a team up
                             there to take control of this
                             situation?

The Director of NASA turns to him.

                                                 NASA DIRECTOR
                             If we had a ship ready for launch
                             in ten minutes, we might be able
                             to reach that site in six months.

The president turns to the Air Force Chief of Staff and just
glares. The General nods affirmative and shrugs.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                                       (Shouting)
                             This can't be left in private
                             hands any longer. We have to
                             study something like this in
                             Nevada, using our own people.
                             This could give an advantage to
                             maintain the power we have to
                             keep the peace in the world.
                             Here he's giving it to everyone
                             and I want it stopped and stopped
                             now, even if I have to declare
                             martial law!

Bill Murraugh stands up.

                                                 BILL MURRAUGH
                             The only way to stop this is to
                             take out his satellites. They're
                             his only link to get a signal
                             back to Earth that anyone can
                             pick up, including the Internet.
                             We have our own satellites up
                             with that capability.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                             Then give the order!

Murraugh leaves the room.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST (CONT'D)
                             Now, how do we take him down when
                             he returns?

                                                 GENERAL APPLEHOFF
                             I frankly don't see how we can,
                             short of using a nuke. In
                             addition, I can't guarantee even
                             that would work. Nothing we've
                             tried has been able to penetrate
                             the shield around the house
                             including a laser. He was right,
                             the house just increases the
                             density of that thing, and the
                             laser bends around it. Same with
                             concentrated microwaves, which
                             says that an electro-magnetic
                             pulse wouldn't work from above.
                             Right now, our best tacticians
                             are at a loss. If you miss with
                             the first shot...well he showed
                             us in New Mexico what he could do
                             if we back him into a corner.

                                                 GENERAL APPLEHOFF (CONT'D)
                             If we could fine-tune the HAARP
                             array, we might be able to attack
                             him from underneath by bouncing
                             the signal through the Earth.

                                                 NATIONAL SECURITY ADVISOR
                             At the moment, his discovery is
                             not a threat to National Security.
                             His ship and his machines are.
                             We should have stopped him months
                             ago. Unless he comes up with
                             detailed plans for a doomsday
                             device, I don't see where he can
                             be any greater threat than he
                             already is. The only thing so
                             far that is on shaky ground is
                             organized religion.

The President winces at that.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                                       (wincing)
                             I know! I've already gotten
                             calls from a dozen Cardinals,
                             several dozen Rabbis,
                             miscellaneous leaders from the
                             Christian Coalition and SCLC, a
                             threatened march from the
                             Southern Baptist Convention, a
                             couple of American Mullahs, all
                             were screaming for blood. I
                             haven't heard from the Buddhists
                             or Hindus yet, but I'm sure
                             that's coming.
                                       (beat)
                             I'm also getting pressure from
                             Wall Street because this guy
                             won't take any of his companies
                             public. I only hope that
                             Puchinskiy is getting as hard a
                             time as I am!

Murraugh returns looking pale.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST (CONT'D)
                             What is it Bill?

                                                 BILL MURRAUGH
                             We just lost six of our biggest
                             birds. Almost a hundred million
                             apiece, not to mention they were
                             also surveillance satellites. We
                             lost a lot of our best eyes.

                                                 GENERAL APPLEHOFF
                             How?

                                                 BILL MURRAUGH
                             Just when they were approaching
                             firing range, they were knocked
                             down. Literally. Just knocked
                             out of orbit and burned up.

                                                 SCIENCE ADVISOR
                             Was there any nuclear material on
                             any of them?

                                                 BILL MURRAUGH
                             All of them, you know that. We
                             use a plutonium power source
                             instead of solar so that they
                             have a greater life.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                                       (Looking pale)
                             Jeeze. When word gets out that
                             we just spread several hundred
                             pounds of poisonous plutonium
                             throughout the atmosphere, every
                             missile on Earth will be
                             targeting Washington. What do
                             they have to lose now?

                                                 NATIONAL SECURITY ADVISOR
                             Nobody has to know a thing. It's
                             not like we're going to say
                             anything, right?
                                       (looking around the table)
                             Unless a big fragment hits a
                             populated area, there's nothing
                             to worry about. Anybody measures
                             an increase in background
                             radiation; we blame it on
                             Angelskov and his machines. It
                             might even turn out to our
                             benefit public-relations wise.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                             The world knows he has nothing
                             radioactive and most of it
                             suspects we do. I don't see
                             where that would work at all
                             except to point out his strengths
                             and our deficiencies because we
                             have to rely on fission, while
                             this jerk can get to other
                             planets using electricity without
                             our backing or help.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST (CONT'D)
                             I think it would make us more the
                             laughing stock than we are
                             already. Besides, it wouldn't
                             surprise me if he doesn't have it
                             all on tape. With his propensity
                             for publicity, he'll release
                             those shots as soon as he gets back!

                                                 BILL MURRAUGH
                             That's almost a billion dollars
                             down in flames, not to mention
                             the blow to our intelligence
                             gathering capabilities. Can't we
                             get him on destruction of
                             government property?

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                                       (Sarcastic)
                             Without revealing what we were
                             doing or even that those
                             offensive satellites existed in
                             the first place? I don't think so.

Everyone is studying either their hands or the grain of the
table. Not a word is spoken.

                                                 PRESIDENT FOREST
                             This man is holding himself above
                             the greatest country on Earth and
                             us up to public ridicule. I want
                             the best brains on it now and I
                             want answers or every one of you
                             will be collecting unemployment!

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. TUNNEL IN FRONT OF THE DOOR

The archaeologists are using camel's hair brushes to remove
the last of the sand from grooves in the surface of the
metal. They stand back and Mike shines a floodlight on the
discovery. All can see that there are four vertical strips
with pictographs cut into them. Two on the left side, two on
the right separated in the center by a large circle with
more figures. Mike motions for the journalists with the
cameras to examine them.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (INTERCOM)
                             Are you recording Vesna?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             Yes, and they are being
                             transmitted also.

There is silence for several minutes as everyone inspects
the panel.

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             I believe it's a Rosetta stone, Sir.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             What makes you say that?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             Even though the dialects are
                             unknown to me, the first three
                             strips contain enough of current
                             languages that I can recognize
                             they all say approximately the
                             same thing.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Hold the translation for now, we
                             need to work on a couple more
                             things, and then we'll be back on
                             board.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             But we could have the translation
                             now, yes?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Yes, but I would prefer that she
                             tell the two of you first. You
                             can make the decision what we do
                             with the information. This is
                             much too big for me to make the
                             decision alone.

Now the journalists protested. Mike waves them down.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             You'll get full coverage, but not
                             right now. We will all discuss
                             this aboard Vesna with the
                             transmission off before it goes
                             out to the public. Meantime, any
                             scholar in ancient languages can
                             probably figure it out in a week
                             or two. This is not secret; we
                             just need to come up with the
                             correct venue.

They respond with reluctant nods and the archaeologists
return to their work.

                                                 GARAN
                             How is this possible that there
                             is shiny metal here? Surely this
                             is a new construction?

Mike turns to the other geologist.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Doctor Jameson, what was it that
                             made you first suspect a meteor
                             killed off the dinosaurs?

                                                 JAMESON
                             It was the K-T boundary, a thin
                             layer of iridium, a rare earth
                             that occurred geologically at the
                             same time. It's found in space,
                             but not on Earth.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             And what are some of the
                             properties of the metal?

                                                 JAMESON
                             Well, it's virtually
                             indestructible and doesn't shrink
                             or expand like most metals in
                             heat and cold. It's still a metal,
                             but extremely durable.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Correct. And alloyed with
                             another noble metal, Platinum,
                             what do you have?

                                                 JAMESON
                             Something practically
                             indestructible; that's what the
                             National Bureau of Standards uses
                             in the meter stick they have on
                             display. It remains a constant
                             standard meter.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             So if you wanted to construct a
                             door that would last almost
                             forever and wouldn't be terribly
                             susceptible to weathering,
                             oxidation, or changes in
                             temperature and would keep a
                             tight seal, what would you make
                             it from?

                                                 JAMESON/GARAN
                                       (Mouths dropping open)
                             Platinum-Iridium!

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Either of you bring any aqua
                             regia or a test kit?

It turns out both had, but Garan has his out first and
places several drops of a clear liquid on the base of the
doorway. Nothing happens at all; the liquid just rolls off
the metal, but starts foaming when it drips onto the iron-
rich dirt.

                                                 JAMESON
                             You may be right. But we won't
                             know for certain until I can do a
                             complete crystallography scan at
                             the lab.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Be my guests.

The two geologists crowd next to the archaeologists to
scrape off some samples of the metal near the floor.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Turning to the Archaeologists)
                             And you, gentlemen, may be able
                             to upstage Howard Carter in one
                             quantum leap.
                                       (beat)
                             Sharon, Lana, let's recap what we
                             have so far. What we have
                             discovered is a pyramid, similar
                             to those in Egypt and Central
                             America except several orders of
                             magnitude larger. We have an
                             opening in this pyramid that
                             wasn't created by natural causes.
                             We have a perfectly square
                             passageway behind the opening,
                             again something that didn't
                             happen by accident. Finally, at
                             the end of the passageway we have
                             a doorway made of an alloy that
                             is probably a mixture of noble
                             metals and rare earths - an alloy
                             that won't expand or shrink, but
                             makes and keeps a perfect seal
                             almost forever.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             Do you mean?...

Mike holds up his hand and interrupts.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Yes. I think each of you needs
                             to prepare your audience for the
                             possibility that whatever is on
                             the other side is almost a half-
                             million years old and is probably
                             still intact.

Sharon gasps and nods.

He turns to all.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             If Doctors Belisar and Barishnikov
                             are done for the moment, let's
                             return to the ship to study what
                             we have so far.

The four young people are at the back of the crowd and start
to protest. They want to open the door now and see what was
on the other side immediately, even though nobody has a clue
yet how to do that.

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EXT. TUNNEL OPENING

Vesna is waiting for them outside the entrance and they all
enter.

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INT. RUSSIAN SCIENCE SECTION

Mike has them recharge their suits with air and power, and
sends John up to store the shovels and gravity generators.
He doesn't believe he will need them again in the near future.

Jameson and Garan run off to their respective labs to start
analysis of the samples that they brought back.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Joe, Igor, why don't the two of
                             you use the lab down here. Vesna
                             can debrief you in private that
                             way. Join us in the control room
                             when you're done. Stromberg,
                             Norodsky, collect whatever
                             equipment you would use in the
                             field to run as full an analysis
                             of standing groundwater as you
                             can quickly and then meet us.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             Kitch, Medvedev, check that you
                             have whatever you would need to
                             test for biologicals. I'd like
                             you to test for airborne,
                             waterborne and soil borne
                             microbes and virii. Ladies,
                             you're with me. You can contact
                             your stations after a while.

                                                                                          CUT TO:

INT. COMMAND DECK

They arrive at the control deck and Mike motions the women
to a couch.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             Vesna, give them a good view of
                             the terrain and cut the
                             microphones in here please.

                                                 VESNA
                             Done.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             I thought you had no more hidden
                             surprises. I'd call that a surprise.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (Grinning from ear to ear)
                             I said no more hidden agendas. I
                             didn't know what we'd find. I
                             had just hoped. Why else do you
                             think I assembled the specialties
                             I did? I have hunches, but right
                             now I'm ad-libbing.

                                                 SHARON MANSON
                             Then what are you suspecting?

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             On Earth they used to think that
                             the pyramids were burial chambers
                             built for Pharaohs. We've found
                             almost no evidence that any of
                             them were ever used for that
                             purpose in Egypt, and I don't
                             think that's the case here.
                             Nevertheless, they had to have
                             some purpose.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             Now that we've discovered a
                             durable metal doorway, my
                             engineering instincts tell me
                             that if I wanted to preserve
                             something for perpetuity in a
                             place with a rapidly disappearing
                             atmosphere and harsh conditions,
                             that's what I would do. Seal it
                             behind something that would make
                             a perfect seal and last as long
                             as my technology would allow. If
                             it had been a stone wall, it
                             would be a different story, but
                             this was something well planned
                             and executed and technologically
                             advanced. There is something
                             behind that door and I am more
                             determined than ever to find out
                             what it is, but I want to do it
                             right. I want to do it out in
                             the open, scientifically,
                             preserving whatever is there.
                             This time the cameras will keep
                             rolling with no interference from
                             me. The two of you will be
                             center stage for six-billion
                             people and I want you prepped for
                             whatever happens.

Both women's postures and manner betray extreme excitement.
Both appear eager to continue, but it is obvious that each
also knows that this would play out on Angel's timetable.

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INT. GEOLOGY LAB

The scientists confirm Mike's suspicion. The door and its
casing were indeed a Platinum-Iridium alloy.

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INT. BIOLOGY LAB

The microbiologists have run full tests on their samples
from the sand and the rock walls of the tunnel and again
found absolutely nothing.

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INT. ARCHAEOLOGY LAB

This is a different story. Vesna has produced printouts of
the inscriptions on the portal to each of the archaeologists
and is explaining her attempted translation of the contents.

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             I have said before, whatever the
                             exact dialect these are in, I am
                             unfamiliar with it. However, the
                             symbols are close enough to what
                             we know of ancient Egyptian,
                             Sumerian, and Hindi that I can
                             draw references between them and
                             extrapolate meaning for the rest.
                             The fourth set of symbols is
                             completely unknown to me and I
                             can find nothing similar in any
                             database with the exception of
                             ancient Incan or Mayan. I don't
                             know for certain, because we have
                             never had a good translation of
                             either. None of these are known
                             exactly, but close enough.

                                                 BELISAR
                             And the symbols in the circle?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             I think Mr. Angel wants to
                             discuss those later.

Barishnikov is getting impatient, his own knowledge of
linguistic anthropology was limited,

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             And what of the translation you
                             have so far?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             It would appear a simple door
                             sign denoting the function, the
                             same as the signs on each of your
                             doors showing this is the Russian
                             Archaeology lab.

                                                 BELISAR
                             Yes. What does it say?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             As far as I can tell, and some of
                             this is conjecture, it reads on
                             each panel, 'Hall of the Ages;
                             Joining of the Four, Priests Alone'.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                                       (Looking puzzled)
                             But, what does that mean?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             I do not know. I can only translate.

                                                 BARISHNIKOV
                             What are the four?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             I can only speculate that would
                             be the four races or species that
                             used the languages on the sign.

                                                 BELISAR
                             Priests Alone?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             I think that a more modern
                             translation might read 'Authorized
                             Personnel Only'.

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INT. COMMAND DECK

The scientists are all gathered on the command deck and take
places in the chairs around the room. Mike is sitting in
the center chair in front of the console, flanked by Sharon
and Lana who are wearing microphone headsets so they can
give their own accounts of events as they unfold. The
transmission resumes and Mike is ready for the open briefing.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                             I think it's time we shared all
                             of our findings with those back
                             home and come to some decisions
                             what to do next. First, I
                             apologize to those of you on
                             Earth for the brief blackout. I
                             thought it best for us up here to
                             get all of the pieces together so
                             that it would make some sense
                             before giving you just half-
                             information and supposition.
                                       (beat)
                             I know the majority of you
                             understand that we have found an
                             artifact up here that is totally
                             anomalous and anachronistic...it
                             shouldn't be here.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL (CONT'D)
                             We may now have some better-
                             educated guesses as to what it is
                             and what we need to do to solve
                             some of the mysteries. Vesna,
                             would you please tell us the
                             translation of the inscriptions
                             that you and Doctor Belisar and
                             Doctor Barishnikov have decided on?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             First, the inscription is
                             repeated in four languages that
                             we believe are pre-cursors of
                             ancient Egyptian, Sumerian, Hindi,
                             and possibly Mayan. It also
                             appears to be more of an
                             identification sign than
                             something ceremonial or historical.
                             It is more along the lines of a
                             sign saying 'Anthropology
                             Laboratory' than a prayer or
                             invocation. It appears to be in
                             very ancient dialects of the
                             languages, but close enough that
                             we can draw some linguistic
                             parallels, similar to being able
                             to read Arthurian texts knowing
                             only American English from the
                             21st century. By comparing the
                             bits of the languages that we can
                             interpret with the symbols in the
                             others that are unfamiliar, we
                             have come up with a translation
                             we feel is close.

                                                 MIKE ANGEL
                                       (chiding)
                             You want to put that in plain
                             language?

The computer ignores him.

                                                 SHARON MANSON
                             "Yes! Don't keep us in suspense. Tell us what you have
                             come up with.

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             The literal translation is something like 'Hall of the Ages;
                             Joining of the Four, Priests Alone'.

                                                 SVETLANA
                             And what would be the meaning of
                             that?

                                                 VESNA (OS)
                             In modern terms, 'Medical
                             laboratory for the four peoples,
                             authorized personnel only'.

                                                                                          FADE OUT:


Ben W. Gardner
Sedona, Arizona

"I do not fear computers. I fear lack of them." --Isaac Asimov

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