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C. The Caucus-race and a Long Tale
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History can be boring. So, it’s up to you to spice things up for us. Pick any person in history. Write up a short story about this person with titles as ridiculous as “Ghengis Khan Gets a New Haircut”. In other words, make it fun! (<1000 words)

Rizal and the Lost Quill

Dr. Jose Rizal, esteemed writer, ophthalmologist, and national hero of the Philippines, was in a state of absolute upheaval. Gone was his typical stoicism, replaced by a whirlwind of frantic energy that seemed to crackle in the cramped confines of his cell. The source of his torment? His precious quill, his lifeline to the world of words, had vanished.

"Imposters! Philistines!" Rizal raged, his voice echoing in the grim prison chamber. His normally immaculate desk had been ravaged, transformed into a battlefield of scattered papers and overturned inkwells. Every crevice of his cell had been searched. His beloved books, once a source of solace, now seemed to mock him. Without his quill, they were merely mute witnesses to his literary paralysis.

It wasn't the physical quill itself he mourned, but rather what it represented. Each feather was a conduit for the burning torrent of his thoughts, a weapon expertly wielded against the oppressive colonial regime. He'd penned fiery novels like Noli Me Tangere, exposing societal ills with a surgeon's precision. Now, his weapon was gone, leaving him defenseless.

The specter of his final novel, the fiery sequel to his revolutionary work, loomed over him. Characters danced in his mind, their fates uncertain. Visions of his antagonist, the despicable Padre Damaso, gloating amidst mountains of unearned privilege, taunted Rizal to the brink of madness. The injustice! To be stymied so close to the finish line was unendurable.

"Have I been betrayed?" Rizal hissed, his eyes narrowing in suspicion. "Which of my so-called allies dares sabotage my work?" The guards outside his cell stoically ignored his tirades, long accustomed to the occasional outbursts from their brilliant but volatile prisoner. His accusations flew wildly: the guards, his beloved mother (God rest her soul, but misplaced sentimentality had no place now), even the cockroaches that dared scurry across his floor.

A frantic Rizal, ever the man of action, turned to the unthinkable. "I will make my own quill! Nature shall provide!" A flurry of movement ensued. Chair legs were inspected and discarded as too blunt. Stray threads from his fraying blanket were commandeered and dipped in ink, only to produce illegible blobs. The floorboards were scrutinized, but yielded nothing but splinters and a profound sense of desperation.

News of Rizal's plight slithered through the prison like wildfire, finally reaching the ears of the Spanish governor. This pompous, small-minded man, with a fondness for cruelty thinly disguised as amusement, saw a golden opportunity. Petty games were the only victories he truly enjoyed.

A pompous package arrived the next day, addressed to Rizal with mocking formality. Within, nestled on a bed of garish crimson satin, lay a dozen quills. At first glance, they looked perfectly serviceable...until Rizal's gaze focused. These were not the feathers of proud eagles, or even sparrows. They were the pathetic, molting remnants of what must have been the most miserable chickens in Manila. A final insult from the governor, a stark reminder of his supposed superiority.

Rizal could have crumbled under the mockery, wept in bitter fury. Instead, a perverse sort of clarity sparked within him. This absurdity, the sheer indignity of it all…it was fuel. Taking up one of the scrawny quills, he dipped it in the inkwell and, trembling with barely contained rage, began to write.

The words flowed in a torrent, sharper than any fine goose quill could produce. His defiance, honed by endless injustices, poured onto the page. The governor's petty cruelties merely sharpened his wit, his satire becoming a rapier thrust against the bloated heart of the colonial system. He would not be silenced, not by stolen quills or the weight of an empire. Laughter, Rizal realized, was the ultimate resistance, echoing far louder than any gunshot.

WORD COUNT:
620 Words

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